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The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
I awoke gently, wrapped in sunbeams and your leisurely arms.
The coffee was strong and patient.
All the pieces fit smoothly.
The poems wrote themselves, and rock ‘n roll did the chores.
Words were enjoyed for soul-sharing and fun, as shame took a long vacation.
All the meetings were constructive and punctual.
Laughter flickered like warming flames between songs and friends and forest adventures.
Ocean thunder cracked my heart wide open.
All the flies left me alone in the garden.
As dew amplified the scent of cooling grasses, the stars blinked on to gaze back at us.
A night-bird sang a love song just for me, and you did too.
We both saw the same falling star.
When our passion was exhausted and our thirst for intimacy was slaked, the day ended just as it had begun –
we two, bodies and hearts,
nested
rooted
whole.
The coffee was strong and patient.
All the pieces fit smoothly.
The poems wrote themselves, and rock ‘n roll did the chores.
Words were enjoyed for soul-sharing and fun, as shame took a long vacation.
All the meetings were constructive and punctual.
Laughter flickered like warming flames between songs and friends and forest adventures.
Ocean thunder cracked my heart wide open.
All the flies left me alone in the garden.
As dew amplified the scent of cooling grasses, the stars blinked on to gaze back at us.
A night-bird sang a love song just for me, and you did too.
We both saw the same falling star.
When our passion was exhausted and our thirst for intimacy was slaked, the day ended just as it had begun –
we two, bodies and hearts,
nested
rooted
whole.
Written by
brokentitanium
(k.)
Published 8th Aug 2023
| Edited 9th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Originally written & posted over a year ago. (Edit: it was 4 years ago!! Geez, time flies.) A great musical accompaniment presented itself!
Music by my friend Darren on bandlab.
Music by my friend Darren on bandlab.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
8th Aug 2023 11:16pm
Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
9th Aug 2023 00:38am
Thank you!! When you start with a laundry miracle, what's not to love?!
I appreciate your enthusiasm. Many thanks.
❤️k
I appreciate your enthusiasm. Many thanks.
❤️k
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
8th Aug 2023 11:42pm
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9th Aug 2023 00:39am
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
9th Aug 2023 3:38am
Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 00:05am
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
9th Aug 2023 4:10am
Dear K,
You’ve done it again! Trifecta! Great write, reading and matching socks! 😊
I love the reading, the background accompaniment was perfect. The touching relationship between husband and wife and balancing everything else that goes on during the day. You’ve captured it all and wrapped it in a beautiful package of creativity. Awesome. H🌷
You’ve done it again! Trifecta! Great write, reading and matching socks! 😊
I love the reading, the background accompaniment was perfect. The touching relationship between husband and wife and balancing everything else that goes on during the day. You’ve captured it all and wrapped it in a beautiful package of creativity. Awesome. H🌷
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Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 00:15am
Dear H,
Thanks so much for your always-enthusiastic support! 💕 I'm glad you enjoyed this. I've been absent for a while, and your response reminds me of why I like it here. You're the best!
❤️k
Thanks so much for your always-enthusiastic support! 💕 I'm glad you enjoyed this. I've been absent for a while, and your response reminds me of why I like it here. You're the best!
❤️k
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 1:58am
Nice one, K. I love it when a day comes together perfectly like that – and you've captured the essence of that special feeling perfectly.. Great voice too. 💐
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Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 2:24am
Thanks! It's kind of a fictional day, to be honest... but the socks really did match up. 🙂
Thanks for dropping by to read, listen & comment!
❤️k
Thanks for dropping by to read, listen & comment!
❤️k
Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 2:58am
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 3:49am
This is so pretty! I like the gentle pace, as it walks us through the full cycle of awareness.
-The appreciation for what's truly good.
What a treat for me to read.
You did great with this!
-The appreciation for what's truly good.
What a treat for me to read.
You did great with this!
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Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 8:13pm
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my little "what if" fantasy... wouldn't that just be the perfect day?? But perfect things do happen, even in the imperfect days, and that's worth celebrating.
Thanks for the applause, I appreciate it!
❤k
Thanks for the applause, I appreciate it!
❤k
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 12:07pm
Goddamn
Just when I think you've done your masterpiece vocally, you come along with this amazing entry.
I love talking songs, ballads almost.
The pace, the lyrics, your intense delivery and the lovely feeling of Om righteousness floats and delivers magic !!
Goddamn I love what you did
This is what the RL is for !!!
BIGGEST LIKE
YOU ROCK RED
❤❤
Just when I think you've done your masterpiece vocally, you come along with this amazing entry.
I love talking songs, ballads almost.
The pace, the lyrics, your intense delivery and the lovely feeling of Om righteousness floats and delivers magic !!
Goddamn I love what you did
This is what the RL is for !!!
BIGGEST LIKE
YOU ROCK RED
❤❤
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Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
10th Aug 2023 8:14pm
WOW thank you!
This is a comment to treasure.
Thank you for all the love. I'm really glad you enjoyed it enough to keep.
❤k
This is a comment to treasure.
Thank you for all the love. I'm really glad you enjoyed it enough to keep.
❤k
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
15th Aug 2023 11:11pm
Well PoetSpeak stole by thunder damnit! He will certainly be getting slapped for that damnit. :p I love the progression throughout the day and all of the amazing imagery. The words, the pace, the music, and everything was artistically pulled together in such a perfect way. But "Just when I think you've done your masterpiece vocally, you come along with this amazing entry." I don't think I can say it better than that. Your voice is truly a gift! Like you. :)
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Re: Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
16th Aug 2023 1:45pm
Well damn. Here I am struggling to write songs, maybe I should just read poetry instead. 🤷♀️
Thanks so much for your wonderful enthusiasm! Your kind comments are also a gift. I hope all the socks match up for you today.
❤️❤️k
Thanks so much for your wonderful enthusiasm! Your kind comments are also a gift. I hope all the socks match up for you today.
❤️❤️k
Re. The day all the socks matched up (with recording)
21st Aug 2023 3:59am
Digging the spoken piece along with the rock groove.
Always enjoy listening to your voice present these pieces. Now I wish all my socks would pair up.
Awesome work broken.
Always enjoy listening to your voice present these pieces. Now I wish all my socks would pair up.
Awesome work broken.
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