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Sex Haiku #2

On hand knees I crawl
She cooks eggs but spreads for me
Tongue flick rosebud spasm

ZenmasterE

Written by ZenmasterE

(Enrico Blanca)

Published 7th Aug 2023

#sex

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Re. Sex Haiku #2

deliabear (Debbie)

7th Aug 2023 12:01pm

Last line was great. I'm glad you joined, look forward to reading more.

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ZenmasterE (Enrico Blanca)

7th Aug 2023 12:23pm

You are right. Last line is the strongest
I shall read some of yours.

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Re. Sex Haiku #2

7th Aug 2023 12:37pm

Suggests an oral kitchen scene, that should spur her cooking on.

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ZenmasterE (Enrico Blanca)

8th Aug 2023 10:30am

It sure did. She cooked with great heat.

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Re. Sex Haiku #2

7th Aug 2023 5:12pm

On hands and knees with tongue flick rosebud spasm definitely creates an image. ;)

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