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dark glow
darkly glow in your angst
and relish your depths
all are deeply reflective of you
inside the greed rise
shelter in the need
fill the void where you can
deepest secrets kept
in the promises grow
with an intellect so keen
direct your business
be yourself above all else
who else can you be?
dangerous affairs of the heart lurk
don't get dragged under
resist kissing the devil
who in rugged blue jeans looks so good
be good to you
when you can be
take on the harder topics
swim the abyss of feeling
get to know your inner being
and flourish
Author's Note
be good to yourselves 💕
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Re. dark glow
6th Aug 2023 11:31pm
I like the personification of the devil in this poem. I wouldn’t mind seeing you expand on that.
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Re: Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 1:00am
thank you graciously dearest Jack for reading and commenting... I liked that bit about him too...I'm glad you did too 💕
Re: Re. dark glow
8th Aug 2023 6:20am
Shall we request that we expand on that much deeper? I think we should!
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Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 2:13am
Re: Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 2:46am
good evening dearest Poet thank you I don't always like to do affirmation poems but sometimes it's good to remind yourself 💕
Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 2:21am
Re: Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 2:47am
Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 7:11am
All I read your poems
Dive into the world of wonders
Every poem of yours makes me travel
Thanks
Dive into the world of wonders
Every poem of yours makes me travel
Thanks
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Re: Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 5:54pm
Re. dark glow
7th Aug 2023 6:28pm
Often the dark glow shines the brightest.
And the angst expands the depths...
That are so deeply reflective of you.
The need only grows to be pulled in.
But more importantly to pull you in.
To feel the void in every way.
Those deepest secrets kept hidden.
While the promises try to expose them.
And still you try to stay out of that hell.
Taking on the harder topics again and again.
Wanting to leave some things buried.
But they do have a way of tormenting you still.
I love your message of being good to yourself.
Definitely be good to yourself and flourish.
And the angst expands the depths...
That are so deeply reflective of you.
The need only grows to be pulled in.
But more importantly to pull you in.
To feel the void in every way.
Those deepest secrets kept hidden.
While the promises try to expose them.
And still you try to stay out of that hell.
Taking on the harder topics again and again.
Wanting to leave some things buried.
But they do have a way of tormenting you still.
I love your message of being good to yourself.
Definitely be good to yourself and flourish.
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Re: Re. dark glow
10th Aug 2023 1:20am
hello beautiful Kristina your lust peaks on my dark glow
stirring within bring me a wicked grin
sinfully delicious thoughts so beautifully placed
grace my pages
and I am again taken off guard
you always pique my interest
with your depth of concepts
innermost views come into perspective
and I realize the intimate nature of you
rife with feeling and understanding
you stimulate my intellect
and make me crave
💕
stirring within bring me a wicked grin
sinfully delicious thoughts so beautifully placed
grace my pages
and I am again taken off guard
you always pique my interest
with your depth of concepts
innermost views come into perspective
and I realize the intimate nature of you
rife with feeling and understanding
you stimulate my intellect
and make me crave
💕
Re: Re. dark glow
11th Aug 2023 3:08pm
Well I do love your dark glow. ;)
and a wicked grin to match
with so many sinful thoughts.
piquing your interest is lovely.
there is such depth found there.
I connect with your intimate nature too.
definitely feeling and understanding.
so happy to stimulate the intellect.
and perhaps more so the craving. <3
You left me at a loss for words.
I truly love your reply...
and a wicked grin to match
with so many sinful thoughts.
piquing your interest is lovely.
there is such depth found there.
I connect with your intimate nature too.
definitely feeling and understanding.
so happy to stimulate the intellect.
and perhaps more so the craving. <3
You left me at a loss for words.
I truly love your reply...
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Re. dark glow
21st Aug 2023 2:38am
Oh crim, your observations are always modest and liberating.
Awesome work.
Awesome work.
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Re: Re. dark glow
21st Aug 2023 8:17pm