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Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
After years training
I have achieved pro status
gold-medal gluttony
Homework aversion
dulls benefic impulses
no work no reward
Epiphanic thought
must eat right and exercise
DING, stop the presses!
I have achieved pro status
gold-medal gluttony
Homework aversion
dulls benefic impulses
no work no reward
Epiphanic thought
must eat right and exercise
DING, stop the presses!
Written by
Gahddess_Worship
(Osomajestuoso)
Published 4th Aug 2023
| Edited 5th Aug 2023
Author's Note
Just psych'n myself up for change.
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Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
4th Aug 2023 8:59am
You can do whatever it is that you put your mind to, BB. I believe in you... you should too, my Majestic one!
Take it day by day.
Much love and oodles of motivation sent your way ✨
🌹🐻 💞🐰🌹
xo
Take it day by day.
Much love and oodles of motivation sent your way ✨
🌹🐻 💞🐰🌹
xo
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Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
17th Aug 2023 3:53am
Thank you so much, Lady Blue🥰 Your encouraging words lift me up and give me mental energy. Your constant caring makes me feel wanted/needed. 🐻💞🐰
Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
5th Aug 2023 5:45am
Dear GW,
You write what a lot of us feel. I agree with BV, you can do anything you set your mind to especially once it’s purged from all the negative chatter. I thought this piece a wonderful send off for the old way of thinking and onto the new! Hurrah! H🌷
You write what a lot of us feel. I agree with BV, you can do anything you set your mind to especially once it’s purged from all the negative chatter. I thought this piece a wonderful send off for the old way of thinking and onto the new! Hurrah! H🌷
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Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
17th Aug 2023 3:59am
Thank you my faithful friend❣ I bid farewell to the blues, me-confusion, and fear of failure but thy're just taking their time pack'n up their stuff. May have to drag it all to the street.😁
You always enliven my spirit and desire to continue down a creative path. For that I am eternally grateful.🥰
You always enliven my spirit and desire to continue down a creative path. For that I am eternally grateful.🥰
Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
17th Aug 2023 1:24am
Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
I am so pleased that you found value in this piece, Grace. I appreciate, very much, the read and wonderful comment. Love your new profile pic as well❣
Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
17th Aug 2023 5:51am
Thank you so much dear Gahddess_Worship. the new pic? Oh just little old me.<3
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Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
18th Aug 2023 6:36pm
Ahh ... how well I know that process of psyching oneself up to make a change. Sometimes it takes months and months -- and sometimes one short epiphanic moment and it's job done and off you go.
Experience of many times "snapping back into the old ways" tells me that sometimes the sky we carry with us is a very powerful force and change comes in small steps -- but I remind myself too that "The journey of a 1,000 miles" also ends with a single step - and one day it's (suddenly) "there". All the best, Josh.
Experience of many times "snapping back into the old ways" tells me that sometimes the sky we carry with us is a very powerful force and change comes in small steps -- but I remind myself too that "The journey of a 1,000 miles" also ends with a single step - and one day it's (suddenly) "there". All the best, Josh.
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Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
18th Aug 2023 7:54pm
Josh,
Your wisdom and life experience convey such a beautiful empathetic ray of hope. Thank you!
Your wisdom and life experience convey such a beautiful empathetic ray of hope. Thank you!
Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
24th Aug 2023 5:49pm
Re: Re. Senryu Triptych - Ponder 3
25th Aug 2023 2:10am
Amen to that, Soledad. I'm trying to have the courage to make healthy changes. You're a great example of healthy living❣