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Nemesis
Wild/winds
winding
upon
spiraling vertebrae
* * *
This world
Will
Seek to make
You
* * *
Give
Up
winding
upon
spiraling vertebrae
* * *
This world
Will
Seek to make
You
* * *
Give
Up
Published 3rd Aug 2023
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3rd Aug 2023 5:54am
I like the play with language and structure. The way you’ve arranged the words creates an escalating emphasis.
