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Worshiping the Sky
Hundreds of thousands of steps
Up pyramids towards the clouds
Where I'm high on the sun
Free of all my troubles and doubts
Should I take my body
Or leave it behind
A weightless experience
Widow my shadow
Cause I'm tired inside time
Worshiping the Sky
Leave gravity
On earth
To worship you
The big topaz blue
I want to be endless
But not too far from home
I want to be fearless
At peace with what will come
Worshiping the Sky
Take my breath
Submerge it
With you
The big topaz blue
Facet me in wavelengths
Reflect my human soul
Prayers into colorful skies
Worshiping the Sky
Up pyramids towards the clouds
Where I'm high on the sun
Free of all my troubles and doubts
Should I take my body
Or leave it behind
A weightless experience
Widow my shadow
Cause I'm tired inside time
Worshiping the Sky
Leave gravity
On earth
To worship you
The big topaz blue
I want to be endless
But not too far from home
I want to be fearless
At peace with what will come
Worshiping the Sky
Take my breath
Submerge it
With you
The big topaz blue
Facet me in wavelengths
Reflect my human soul
Prayers into colorful skies
Worshiping the Sky
Author's Note
The sky was so so blue today. Clear and vast.
Wanted to write about it:)
Wrote while listening to
Yeah Yeah Yeahs - Lovebomb
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GwV7LplkpeI
Wanted to write about it:)
Wrote while listening to
Yeah Yeah Yeahs - Lovebomb
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GwV7LplkpeI
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Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 1:49am
Don't take the body, freaking pure energy, nothing but pure emotions. Tight one Lady
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 1:51am
Hey Meme!
That's what I was trying to convey. The transformation.
Thank you for getting it perfectly.
Dude the song I wrote it to is awesome!!
It has an air quality about it.
That's what I was trying to convey. The transformation.
Thank you for getting it perfectly.
Dude the song I wrote it to is awesome!!
It has an air quality about it.
Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:08am
Here too
Acute Blue
Low humidity
Heaven stuff
Drinks on the veranda
Damn near perfect
Grab it while it grabs you
BIG BLUE LIKE
Acute Blue
Low humidity
Heaven stuff
Drinks on the veranda
Damn near perfect
Grab it while it grabs you
BIG BLUE LIKE
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:12am
Drinks on the Veranda sounds
like a title to a poem!!!
What shall it be PS?
Vodka or Tequila? LOL
Blend them both right?
Vodquila is a real thing!!
I looked it up. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
like a title to a poem!!!
What shall it be PS?
Vodka or Tequila? LOL
Blend them both right?
Vodquila is a real thing!!
I looked it up. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:12am
Outa this world! Be careful leaving Earth's gravity though. You don't wanna end up like David Bowie's Starman, right? Gonna take a quick listen now. Billy's inspired & on form tonight! ;-)
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:37am
Hey Billy!
Thanks for your snaps on this. I'm a huge Bowie fan!!
hahaha - on the leaving gravity.
I was feeling spiritual this afternoon looking at
the blue sky.
Thanks for taking a read amigo!
Thanks for your snaps on this. I'm a huge Bowie fan!!
hahaha - on the leaving gravity.
I was feeling spiritual this afternoon looking at
the blue sky.
Thanks for taking a read amigo!
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:39am
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 2:47am
In stead of weightless experience I was going to
put out of body experience but decided against it.
maybe I should edit?
put out of body experience but decided against it.
maybe I should edit?
Re. Worshiping the Sky
Lol. Look, we all know you are planning to leave this Earth for outer space despite your coy disguise, right? Either that or you're a great fan of Star Trek like me & my good friend Em-ily. Seriously though, I feel 'weightlessness' works because you mention leaving Earth's gravity. Out-of-body doesn't work for me. Leaving Earth's gravity works for me, haha but rather you than me... no offence! ;-)
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2nd Aug 2023 2:56am
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2nd Aug 2023 2:57am
Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 3:52am
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 1:42am
Hi Cisco!
It just grabbed my attention at work the other day!
So so clear and beautiful. Just got inspired:)
Thanks for stopping by!
It just grabbed my attention at work the other day!
So so clear and beautiful. Just got inspired:)
Thanks for stopping by!
Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 5:50am
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 1:46am
hey there Cipher!
I love the idea of the sky being purifying cause it looks so
clear and cleansing. Just got inspired.
then I heard the song and it really started to click.
Thanks for the RL amigo!!
I love the idea of the sky being purifying cause it looks so
clear and cleansing. Just got inspired.
then I heard the song and it really started to click.
Thanks for the RL amigo!!
Re. Worshiping the Sky
Dear A,
Anything having to do with the sky and celestial happenings and I’m completely spell bound. I loved that for me, this write had that vibe and I also read it as though it could be a metaphor about someone. Probably a stretch but I have a broad imagination 🤯
Lovely write no matter how I read it. 😊
H 🌷
Anything having to do with the sky and celestial happenings and I’m completely spell bound. I loved that for me, this write had that vibe and I also read it as though it could be a metaphor about someone. Probably a stretch but I have a broad imagination 🤯
Lovely write no matter how I read it. 😊
H 🌷
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 1:52am
Hi H!!
So you got me. Mark's eyes are so so light blue close up:)
But ssshhh - don't tell him!.
He might use them against me and it won't be a fair fight!! hahaha
Thank you for the snaps on this write. I've been trying to get back to
writing more. I'm currently playing with the idea.
The title might be Rosary of Rosemary.
It's in the beginning stage - but I'm feeling something:)
Thanks for the RL!!
Hope you had a great vacation btw
So you got me. Mark's eyes are so so light blue close up:)
But ssshhh - don't tell him!.
He might use them against me and it won't be a fair fight!! hahaha
Thank you for the snaps on this write. I've been trying to get back to
writing more. I'm currently playing with the idea.
The title might be Rosary of Rosemary.
It's in the beginning stage - but I'm feeling something:)
Thanks for the RL!!
Hope you had a great vacation btw
Re. Worshiping the Sky
2nd Aug 2023 1:45pm
Hello A. It’s so good to see you.
The first stanza and the last line of the second got to me. I unconsciously started reading them together.
To have an out of body experience, leaving troubles behind and existing only in the sky sounds so enticing.
I’m in love with this, as I am with all of your work.
On a side note: I love the varied places you get inspiration from.
Have a really nice day. I truly mean that.
The first stanza and the last line of the second got to me. I unconsciously started reading them together.
To have an out of body experience, leaving troubles behind and existing only in the sky sounds so enticing.
I’m in love with this, as I am with all of your work.
On a side note: I love the varied places you get inspiration from.
Have a really nice day. I truly mean that.
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 2:02am
Hi Her:)
it's so good to see you too. On the first stanza I wanted to be sure to
put in the word pyramids cause they were a place of worship. Sometimes tragically so with sacrifices. LOL Yikes - which made me think of
widows and shadows so I wanted to add that in as well.
I would love an out of body experience but I feel I would chicken out and zip right back to my body. Nope not ready for all that!! - hahaha
Inspiration comes and goes. I grab onto it when I can:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
it's so good to see you too. On the first stanza I wanted to be sure to
put in the word pyramids cause they were a place of worship. Sometimes tragically so with sacrifices. LOL Yikes - which made me think of
widows and shadows so I wanted to add that in as well.
I would love an out of body experience but I feel I would chicken out and zip right back to my body. Nope not ready for all that!! - hahaha
Inspiration comes and goes. I grab onto it when I can:)
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)
Re. Worshiping the Sky
3rd Aug 2023 00:00am
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 2:18am
Hey LJ!
it's been a minute - I'm so happy to see you:)
When the sky is clear and blue it does bring serenity - at least to me it does.
Great word!!
Fixing to see your page in a bit. It's always a pleasure when you post.
Later chica!!
it's been a minute - I'm so happy to see you:)
When the sky is clear and blue it does bring serenity - at least to me it does.
Great word!!
Fixing to see your page in a bit. It's always a pleasure when you post.
Later chica!!
Re. Worshiping the Sky
3rd Aug 2023 3:25am
"Widow my shadow" - super awesome line! It's worth me stealing!
The write itself describes an ascension towards enlightenment, yes? At the least, awareness of "the bigger picture" that awaits you.
Your enthusiasm pays off in your creative flair here. Really well done. You're on a roll lately!
The write itself describes an ascension towards enlightenment, yes? At the least, awareness of "the bigger picture" that awaits you.
Your enthusiasm pays off in your creative flair here. Really well done. You're on a roll lately!
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
hey babe!!
I knew you were going to like that line!!
It is an ascension of the mind.
Took me back - when I was looking up at
you cause you're super tall!!
Yes - you're eyes babe:)
Glad you enjoyed it!!
Thanks for the RL buddy!! hehehe
I knew you were going to like that line!!
It is an ascension of the mind.
Took me back - when I was looking up at
you cause you're super tall!!
Yes - you're eyes babe:)
Glad you enjoyed it!!
Thanks for the RL buddy!! hehehe
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 10:25pm
We're the same height laying down.
Wait, that depends....
Nevermind.
Smooch!
Wait, that depends....
Nevermind.
Smooch!
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Re. Worshiping the Sky
the sky...
surely the truest of blues to wordship,
always providing just the right hue for the moment.
your words, your voice...
invoke me, my thoughts,
to kneel,
to observe the vastness
... eliminating all fear
this blanket of blue,
security, a reflecting within my eyes.
the power of that topaz blue,
enriched by this hue.
enjoyable are your writes,
bringing light to what needs noticing.
thank you for sharing.
surely the truest of blues to wordship,
always providing just the right hue for the moment.
your words, your voice...
invoke me, my thoughts,
to kneel,
to observe the vastness
... eliminating all fear
this blanket of blue,
security, a reflecting within my eyes.
the power of that topaz blue,
enriched by this hue.
enjoyable are your writes,
bringing light to what needs noticing.
thank you for sharing.
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
5th Aug 2023 2:42am
Hey Mystic!!
Holy crap!!
What a great reply
It's really lovely Brian.
Thank you for that.
It's what we are here for right?
To be inspired and write!!
I'm happy to see you writing again and
reading in DUP!!
Fixing to go check out your write!
hope life has been
Holy crap!!
What a great reply
It's really lovely Brian.
Thank you for that.
It's what we are here for right?
To be inspired and write!!
I'm happy to see you writing again and
reading in DUP!!
Fixing to go check out your write!
hope life has been
Re. Worshiping the Sky
8th Aug 2023 2:01am
Love it! I think many of us long to be part of that oneness, one way or another. To be able to be everywhere but at the same time close to home, but enjoying the peacefulness the sky (and the universe) have to offer.
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
9th Aug 2023 2:33am
Hey MS
I'm so glad you enjoyed this write. The sky that day was quite
azule. Made me feel inspired and had to write this down.
Thank you so much for stopping by and taking a read!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this write. The sky that day was quite
azule. Made me feel inspired and had to write this down.
Thank you so much for stopping by and taking a read!!
Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
9th Aug 2023 3:06am
Re. Worshiping the Sky
9th Aug 2023 3:48pm
So many steps...
They can be hard to climb at times.
But you look so wonderful in the clouds.
Getting high on the sun!
Definitely take your body...
It's so fun to play in the sky. ;)
Leaving the things that pull you down.
And perhaps it's the sky that will worship you.
Endless, fearless, and at peace.
What a wonderful thought that is.
Taking my breath away.
Submerging with you in these words.
'Facet me in wavelengths
Reflect my human soul'
That imagery is absolutely beautiful.
I love how you find inspiration in everything.
The facets of your soul really do shine.
Casting a prism of colors all around DUP. :)
I have missed you Chica!
They can be hard to climb at times.
But you look so wonderful in the clouds.
Getting high on the sun!
Definitely take your body...
It's so fun to play in the sky. ;)
Leaving the things that pull you down.
And perhaps it's the sky that will worship you.
Endless, fearless, and at peace.
What a wonderful thought that is.
Taking my breath away.
Submerging with you in these words.
'Facet me in wavelengths
Reflect my human soul'
That imagery is absolutely beautiful.
I love how you find inspiration in everything.
The facets of your soul really do shine.
Casting a prism of colors all around DUP. :)
I have missed you Chica!
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Re: Re. Worshiping the Sky
11th Aug 2023 1:32am
Hi Kristina!!
What a beautiful comment. Thank you so so much:)
It was one of those writes that felt good while
writing. But reading this comment was equally awesome!
Finding peace sometimes takes work - hence all those
damn steps. LOL
I'm so happy you enjoyed my moment of serenity:)
Thanks for reading chica.
I've missed you too!!
What a beautiful comment. Thank you so so much:)
It was one of those writes that felt good while
writing. But reading this comment was equally awesome!
Finding peace sometimes takes work - hence all those
damn steps. LOL
I'm so happy you enjoyed my moment of serenity:)
Thanks for reading chica.
I've missed you too!!