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An Orgy? No Thanks
Orgy
Fascination with them
I can't relate
Just not something
I seek on my plate
Okay maybe two women
I fantasy here or there
But a room of sex[font=Trebuchet MS]
Not one iota of care
Call me old fashion
Or out of date
But I like knowing one partner
Is feeling so great
Two bodies here two bodies there
Is it so much better
With pairs everywhere
And if I am really wild
About the partner of mine
Then to all the others
I am really so blind
Even if you watching
What pleasure can you find
Except a neck with whiplash
Other uses of my time...
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Fascination with them
I can't relate
Just not something
I seek on my plate
Okay maybe two women
I fantasy here or there
But a room of sex[font=Trebuchet MS]
Not one iota of care
Call me old fashion
Or out of date
But I like knowing one partner
Is feeling so great
Two bodies here two bodies there
Is it so much better
With pairs everywhere
And if I am really wild
About the partner of mine
Then to all the others
I am really so blind
Even if you watching
What pleasure can you find
Except a neck with whiplash
Other uses of my time...
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For some reason
19th Apr 2012 4:46am
re: For some reason
19th Apr 2012 5:34am
Old fashioned?
19th Apr 2012 5:28am
Jazz,
You may be old fashioned or just a man who would devote himself to just one woman - pretty refreshing in today's society of "throw away everything" including relationships.
Btw - I am with you - two bodies twisting together is definitely enough for one room.. If I want to watch - hire a porno.... Want to watch with me? Then it could get interesting....
Well done!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
You may be old fashioned or just a man who would devote himself to just one woman - pretty refreshing in today's society of "throw away everything" including relationships.
Btw - I am with you - two bodies twisting together is definitely enough for one room.. If I want to watch - hire a porno.... Want to watch with me? Then it could get interesting....
Well done!
Cheers. Vixen ;-) x
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re: Old fashioned?
19th Apr 2012 5:33am
Well not that big of a deal, I guess. Some people let their imaginations go wild. Just so happens that even in my most debauched fantasies an orgy isn't in them. To each his own as long as there is consent and it is adults.
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19th Apr 2012 8:02am
An Orgy? No Thanks
19th Apr 2012 12:13pm
you lost me after the title, sometimes lost is where one needs to be, so I read again and I was lost once more, but this time not until after the end.
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re: An Orgy? No Thanks
19th Apr 2012 10:02pm
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2012 10:54pm
Nice.
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nicely put
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2012 11:03pm
I think this is a nice write as it is an insight in a deep way into how one mans treasure is another mans junk. The exact concept you mention of knowing one woman on a deeper level is what I think is the most profound in the scheme as it wraps up the title. Also, in a comment you mention that even in your most far out fantasies an orgy is not a fancy-that insight into self is what creates a healthy balanced human being-not always knowing what you want but at the least knowing what you don't want..that is a sign of a person grounded enough to maintain a healthy relationship. Well done on the write and the insight, Peace and Thank you-
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re: nicely put
22nd Apr 2012 11:26pm
Not sure if I am quite as noble as the words you use, but I do appreciate the thoughtful words.