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Marquis de Sade
Kneeling in the shackles and chains
Seductively begging the master "kill!"
Blood-splattered, unwashed floor
A loaded barrel put to the heart
Clothes made of skin, eyes made of glass
Soul made of ice - because I died
But still You won't let me die
And again the bloodthirsty whip whistles
And again the sunset pours blood
so we gathered for a masquerade
Every look, wounds with a dagger blade
And poison flows down painted lips
Welcome to my hell, my punishment
Here everyone will be glad for pain
Because they say that my Lord is
the Marquis de Sade
I lie motionless, submissive to You
Pray for mercy, and swallow tears
After all, You will not let me die
Only torment - forever and ever
Greedy you take me over and over
My orgasm flows into eternity
Covering you with my lust
As pain and pleasure merges...
Seductively begging the master "kill!"
Blood-splattered, unwashed floor
A loaded barrel put to the heart
Clothes made of skin, eyes made of glass
Soul made of ice - because I died
But still You won't let me die
And again the bloodthirsty whip whistles
And again the sunset pours blood
so we gathered for a masquerade
Every look, wounds with a dagger blade
And poison flows down painted lips
Welcome to my hell, my punishment
Here everyone will be glad for pain
Because they say that my Lord is
the Marquis de Sade
I lie motionless, submissive to You
Pray for mercy, and swallow tears
After all, You will not let me die
Only torment - forever and ever
Greedy you take me over and over
My orgasm flows into eternity
Covering you with my lust
As pain and pleasure merges...
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Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Jul 2023 9:43pm
Of such your eloquence waxes, rising beyond my words to tell. I'm just happy to see you here writing again, Kristina. I hope youre enjoying a season of peace from life's trials🌼❤
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26th Jul 2023 10:02pm
Well hey there Joe! and no I don't believe you are average for a minute. ;) And I always love your words; I cannot imagine rising above them. Yes - it has been quite some time since my last post, it is amazing how fast time passes but I have been dealing with a very difficult situation and so my attention has been elsewhere. I hope to interact more in the future but I guess we will see. I really appreciate your wishing me well and thank you so much for stopping by to leave me your thoughts. Hopefully I will find peace at some point but I suppose grief is a hard emotion to tackle. I hope you are having a really good year so far. And I know it's really HOT out there so make sure to stay cool. ;) X
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Jul 2023 10:27pm
I've always wished the best for you, and I still do. My hopes are always for the best for you X
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26th Jul 2023 11:09pm
You are very sweet and it shines through in the depth of your writing. Thank you. 💖💋
Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Jul 2023 10:36pm
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Jul 2023 11:12pm
Oh yes! this is the way. If you really want to feel the absolute intensity and height of pleasure and desire then you must accept and feel the pain. So often the more unbearable it is, the greater the climax... And you find yourself needing it more and more. X
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27th Jul 2023 11:15pm
Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 2:23am
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 3:37pm
It always feels so good Francisco... I need the intensity of feelings physically; it makes everything else melt away in the moment. And the climax is absolutely incredible for everyone involved. ;) X
Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 10:18am
Damn this is 🔥🔥🔥
"I lie motionless, submissive to You
Pray for mercy, and swallow tears
After all, You will not let me die
Only torment - forever and ever"
Now that's the kind of poetry we need more of friend 😁
"I lie motionless, submissive to You
Pray for mercy, and swallow tears
After all, You will not let me die
Only torment - forever and ever"
Now that's the kind of poetry we need more of friend 😁
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 3:48pm
I love lighting some fires for you DC. ;) There is something about being submissive that is so sexy and exciting... to fulfill someone's deepest fantasies... That is the best reward and it is or becomes your own fantasies. I love that you want more. :) X
Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 5:07pm
i have negle ted reading you for sometime
then boom im hit with this
makes me feel insignificant as a scribbler
then boom im hit with this
makes me feel insignificant as a scribbler
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 6:04pm
Hey AP, I am so happy to see you on my page and even more so if you connected with and liked what I wrote. :) But you absolutely should never feel insignificant as a scribbler because you are great... Thank you for the surprise and making me smile. X
Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 5:57pm
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 6:22pm
Oh yes! it does doesn't it... and of course it does. ;) Dressed just like you like it, sitting up straight waiting for the next command... and what surprises, pain and ecstasy are to come. Oh the anticipation and perhaps even a bit of sass on pouty lips to really get things underway. lol I think you know what I am talking about...
So glad to see the BIG LIKE again and thank you so much for the RL. X
So glad to see the BIG LIKE again and thank you so much for the RL. X
Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 10:44pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 excellent 👌 sadistic sadomasicus dominating pleasure ♥ driven over the edge into complete obedience and submission well orchestrated and displayed great 👍 musing please keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
P.s. when are we going to collaborate???
P.s. when are we going to collaborate???
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
27th Jul 2023 11:23pm
Oh yes! you are so right REMARKABLE, sadistic sadomasochistic dominating pleasure all the way! ;) I love to be driven over the edge in complete submission making all those fantasies come true... All the while getting my own needs met culminating in such an incredible climax. A masochist muse inspiring so many deep dark thoughts. ;)
Ah, it has been quite some time since I did a collaboration but it's true we have never done one have we... I suppose if you send me something we could see what happens. :) X (just note I will be out of town over the weekend)
Ah, it has been quite some time since I did a collaboration but it's true we have never done one have we... I suppose if you send me something we could see what happens. :) X (just note I will be out of town over the weekend)
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
28th Jul 2023 00:52am
Ok 👌 cool 😎 copy honey be safe 🙏 ok safe travels 👍 I will definitely 👍 write something to send you ok kris! Just hope you like it and will be able to write ✍ to it ok honey peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
28th Jul 2023 2:41pm
Okay great! ;) I might be crazy but I will try to be safe too. I do love the winding mountain roads though. ;) You have a wonderful weekend! 💖
Re. Marquis de Sade
28th Jul 2023 5:03pm
Reminds me of reading "The Misfortunes of Virtue"... well penned my dear...
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Hey LDF! It's always great to hear from you. I have never actually read "The Misfortunes of Virtue" so that has definitely been added to my reading list now. It certainly looks like something I will enjoy. Thank you so much for casting your lovely and super talented eye my way. I really appreciate your thoughts so much. :) X
Re. Marquis de Sade
28th Jul 2023 6:46pm
120 days of Sodom was his masterpiece. The most graphic book I've ever read. It was turned into a very controversial film called Salò.
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
28th Jul 2023 6:57pm
Hi Evocation, it's nice to meet you. With a name like 120 days of Sodom, that must be a masterpiece indeed. I am definitely intrigued by it being the most graphic book you have ever read. That absolutely sounds like a must read to me. And controversial has my name written all over it I suppose so I will definitely look up that film. Thank you so much for the suggestion. ;) X
Re. Marquis de Sade
1st Aug 2023 1:16am
You always seem to be tied up & blindfolded. At least you can still hear, I guess! Now hear this... it's about time you were set free! 😉
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
1st Aug 2023 2:25am
Oh boy! that's so true!!! I do always seem to be tied up, blindfolded, controlled, and used. But I can always hear and I hear you too. So it is about time I was set free isn't it? :p I have to admit you can be very perceptive Billy. ;) I really liked what you had to say damnit! :p There is something about being set free I suppose... I did just get back from a nice trip deep into the mountains though and I needed that. X <3
Re. Marquis de Sade
2nd Aug 2023 7:54pm
A few of your trademarks are within this piece:
(1) The living dead Master who won’t let you die, most likely due to a pair of punctures on your neck. However, you seek the immortality the master has – one that is vibrant with pain and pleasure adventures.
(2) Sex slave to the master – were the captivity blurs the line between pain and pleasure. Yet the pain a reminder you are still amongst the living, and still have feelings.
(3) The desire for absolute freedom, unrestrained by morality, religion, or law. Hence the reference to “Marquis de Sade” as you seek the next kink without being judged from the ”outside”.
(4) Every look, wounds with a dagger blade – the fear of disappointing your dark lover, losing the spark that keeps your flame lit.
From reading the poem, “not letting you die” is a good thing. The BDSM, suffering, etc. means you are feeling something. You are alive and not succumbing to complacency where your life is just going through the motions. Like pinching yourself to check that you are not in a comatose state.
(1) The living dead Master who won’t let you die, most likely due to a pair of punctures on your neck. However, you seek the immortality the master has – one that is vibrant with pain and pleasure adventures.
(2) Sex slave to the master – were the captivity blurs the line between pain and pleasure. Yet the pain a reminder you are still amongst the living, and still have feelings.
(3) The desire for absolute freedom, unrestrained by morality, religion, or law. Hence the reference to “Marquis de Sade” as you seek the next kink without being judged from the ”outside”.
(4) Every look, wounds with a dagger blade – the fear of disappointing your dark lover, losing the spark that keeps your flame lit.
From reading the poem, “not letting you die” is a good thing. The BDSM, suffering, etc. means you are feeling something. You are alive and not succumbing to complacency where your life is just going through the motions. Like pinching yourself to check that you are not in a comatose state.
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
4th Aug 2023 00:54am
Oh yes! so many I suppose...
I do love it when someone bites my neck and drains me of all my fluids... That's definitely no easy task. ;) But I love for those pain and pleasure adventures... and die too...
Ah, you are so perceptive. Submitting to the Master's every desire and all of the deepest fantasies. Living through each and every one making them all come true, the pain definitely a reminder that I still have feelings. Seeking it again and again, addicted...
Absolute freedom, what an incredible thought. Unrestrained and able to enact any and every desire always seeking the next kink. Always pushing the limits ready for the next thing...
I never want to lose that spark that keeps my flame lit. And I never want to disappoint... I can handle the wounds...
Oh yes! "not letting you die" is a good thing. Feeling something is vital... The pleasure and the pain keeps me alive. I need to live feeling everything so intensely... X
I do love it when someone bites my neck and drains me of all my fluids... That's definitely no easy task. ;) But I love for those pain and pleasure adventures... and die too...
Ah, you are so perceptive. Submitting to the Master's every desire and all of the deepest fantasies. Living through each and every one making them all come true, the pain definitely a reminder that I still have feelings. Seeking it again and again, addicted...
Absolute freedom, what an incredible thought. Unrestrained and able to enact any and every desire always seeking the next kink. Always pushing the limits ready for the next thing...
I never want to lose that spark that keeps my flame lit. And I never want to disappoint... I can handle the wounds...
Oh yes! "not letting you die" is a good thing. Feeling something is vital... The pleasure and the pain keeps me alive. I need to live feeling everything so intensely... X
Re. Marquis de Sade
8th Aug 2023 8:45pm
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
8th Aug 2023 10:17pm
Always Erotic...
Perhaps my needs are Psychotic...
Like the song "Sweet but Psycho" ;)
I will always be the most powerful narcotic.
Lifting you up and taking you down. ;)
And always addictive. You know that...
Your twelve step program always leads back to me.
Of course... I love a collar, chain, and leather...
So submissive but who is really in control?
Perhaps my needs are Psychotic...
Like the song "Sweet but Psycho" ;)
I will always be the most powerful narcotic.
Lifting you up and taking you down. ;)
And always addictive. You know that...
Your twelve step program always leads back to me.
Of course... I love a collar, chain, and leather...
So submissive but who is really in control?
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
18th Aug 2023 1:05pm
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
18th Aug 2023 2:39pm
You know who has the power to get what she wants and needs.
But it's what you need so badly too. ;)
But it's what you need so badly too. ;)
Re. Marquis de Sade
20th Aug 2023 6:40am
Old Marquis would be so proud of your torturous and beautiful offering here Kristina. The vibrant depictions and emotions flow so well, it's pretty amazing how you let the words spill nonchalantly, elegantly and so enticing.
Great work.
Great work.
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
21st Aug 2023 2:11am
Ah I love the thought that Marquis would be so proud; that is high praise. :) I can be a torturous and beautiful offering. :p You always have a way of making me feel good knowing that you appreciate what I write. That you can truly take in the vibrant depictions and emotions that flow... 'words spill nonchalantly, elegantly, and so enticing' I love that... Thanks so much Wally, you are such a wonderful presence here. X
Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Sep 2023 1:04am
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Sep 2023 2:21pm
I am all about torturing and being tortured. ;) But you know that... Look at the kneeling submission and decide what will you do with that power... I wonder... Because it's exciting to think of being all of those deep dark fantasies... ;) I love it!
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Sep 2023 3:29pm
Yes
The mind play
I've looked at that picture 100 times.
Keep her in saved pix
She's perfect and waiting to fall...
Adore her and you ..
The mind play
I've looked at that picture 100 times.
Keep her in saved pix
She's perfect and waiting to fall...
Adore her and you ..
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Sep 2023 8:06pm
Re. Marquis de Sade
2nd Nov 2023 7:26pm
i tried to read through 120 days of sodom. made it maybe 1/3 of the way thru, gratuity. this isn't bad though, cheers.
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
3rd Nov 2023 11:40am
Hey nnn, ah yes some things do not appeal to everyone but I am really glad you thought this one wasn't bad. :) Cheers!
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
3rd Nov 2023 7:43pm
hey kristina,
as for de sade's tastes to each his own, i just didnt think he was that great at writing it. to me yours was better. i havent written in the style in a while, you might appreciate some of my older stuff,
cheers, cheers!
as for de sade's tastes to each his own, i just didnt think he was that great at writing it. to me yours was better. i havent written in the style in a while, you might appreciate some of my older stuff,
cheers, cheers!
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Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
3rd Nov 2023 8:42pm
I will try to check out some soon. :) Just been caught up in a lot of stuff as of late so I haven't been around on here much sadly. :(
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
3rd Nov 2023 9:19pm
i haven't been on here in years, just getting reacquainted. i used to be a regular.
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Re. Marquis de Sade
24th Jan 2024 00:26am
Re: Re. Marquis de Sade
26th Jan 2024 3:24pm
Well damn! I love that response so much! ;) I don't know what to say. Thank you so much for that. It makes me so happy that you can identify closely with my thoughts and words; and appreciate them.