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Don't You Dare
Don't you dare
ever lose me ,
as without you
lost , forever I will be ,
the payment , the cost
of such is purgatory ,
pain at it's most
embossed will stand on me .
Explanations
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
We talk
we laugh
have thought ,
the same
insane much more ,
all pain
will wane for sure ,
mind games
will leave your doors .
ever lose me ,
as without you
lost , forever I will be ,
the payment , the cost
of such is purgatory ,
pain at it's most
embossed will stand on me .
Explanations
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
We talk
we laugh
have thought ,
the same
insane much more ,
all pain
will wane for sure ,
mind games
will leave your doors .
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2012 3:04am
Explanations
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
I love the whole thing--but knowing you--this part is scary...
:-(
?
great write...as always. x
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
I love the whole thing--but knowing you--this part is scary...
:-(
?
great write...as always. x
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I'm saying I cant express in words so easy how much it would destroy me if you dared <3 :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 19th Apr 2012 3:16am
19th Apr 2012 3:15am
I know--That is what I meant :-)
for a writer to be unable to express something in words--especially you..that is scary-right? LOL
for a writer to be unable to express something in words--especially you..that is scary-right? LOL
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19th Apr 2012 3:24am
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Anonymous
19th Apr 2012 4:43am
Explanations
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
Okay then....(*)...................................................................................For you...to ease that troubled mind..<3
Explanations,
Do not seek-
as words and lines
from the mind
do not bind you
to me
It's something larger
than eternity and-
I too despise the
Idea of no "we"
What is meant..
will always be.
can't find , a sentence
or a line , to make sense
in my mind , to express
these thoughts of I .
Okay then....(*)...................................................................................For you...to ease that troubled mind..<3
Explanations,
Do not seek-
as words and lines
from the mind
do not bind you
to me
It's something larger
than eternity and-
I too despise the
Idea of no "we"
What is meant..
will always be.
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19th Apr 2012 8:25am
:)
19th Apr 2012 4:25am
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19th Apr 2012 8:26am
:)
19th Apr 2012 4:31am
re: :)
19th Apr 2012 8:27am
Lovely
19th Apr 2012 6:39am
re: Lovely
19th Apr 2012 8:29am
re: Lovely
19th Apr 2012 8:29am