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Glitter
The summer grass was kissed by glittery glistening drops of dew.
As if the world had been born sparkling and new.
Trying to mimick shimmering stars in the darkling sky.
What is the secret to keeping our inner twinkle alive?
Those sparks of heart fire, the flashing code of the soul's fireflies.
Rocked by the lull of dreaming's moon shining tide.
From the glitter in your heart, you must never hide
The sun paled in comparison to human shine.
As if the world had been born sparkling and new.
Trying to mimick shimmering stars in the darkling sky.
What is the secret to keeping our inner twinkle alive?
Those sparks of heart fire, the flashing code of the soul's fireflies.
Rocked by the lull of dreaming's moon shining tide.
From the glitter in your heart, you must never hide
The sun paled in comparison to human shine.
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Re. Glitter
24th Jul 2023 12:56pm
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24th Jul 2023 12:58pm
Thank you so much.
Wanted to remind myself, I can still beam light in my dark.
Your kind comments are so much appreciated.
Wanted to remind myself, I can still beam light in my dark.
Your kind comments are so much appreciated.
Re. Glitter
24th Jul 2023 1:19pm
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Re. Glitter
24th Jul 2023 2:32pm
I agree with all previous comments. I’m
always looking forward to your poems, as you know, because the imagery is so striking.
Bravo on this one :)
always looking forward to your poems, as you know, because the imagery is so striking.
Bravo on this one :)
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Re: Re. Glitter
24th Jul 2023 3:04pm
You are one of the ones with lots of glitter in your heart.
That is so nice what you said, made me feel so good. 💜
That is so nice what you said, made me feel so good. 💜
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Re. Glitter
27th Jul 2023 11:23pm
Eloquent expression here. I see you're stepping up your rhyme game. The direction, atmosphere, emotion, metaphors, etc. are all here. You're leveling up! Thanks for sharing - looking forward to more.
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27th Jul 2023 11:51pm