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I am made
of
Starlight;
bundled up
and
bedazzled.
Human.
Conditioned
to be afraid
to show
emotional damage
and loneliness
envelops me
like a blanket of
tragedy
of
Starlight;
bundled up
and
bedazzled.
Human.
Conditioned
to be afraid
to show
emotional damage
and loneliness
envelops me
like a blanket of
tragedy
Published 23rd Jul 2023
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23rd Jul 2023 4:44am
Nicely done...
Nice form and creative use of punctuation...
Stanza III moved into stanza IV beautifully...
Nice form and creative use of punctuation...
Stanza III moved into stanza IV beautifully...
23rd Jul 2023 11:26am
Third stanza resonates. Most people don't want to deal with or hear about our messy or damaged emotions. People are afraid of feeling.
I like the poem a lot.
I like the poem a lot.
