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Image for the poem                 f e e d b a c k        

               f e e d b a c k        

       
         
         
         
 She sits across in the room on a custom made Durian sofa    
 with burnished tiger print          
 her three diamond pendants shine softly  
 in the dim riot        
     
 She    
   
 -thrusts herself once          
 -toys with her silken curls          
 -snaps her manicured fingers       
 -puckers her glossy lips       
 -takes out the small mirror        
  that reads DKNY in black        
     
 She    
      
  daubs-brightens-highlights        
  mascara-lycra-extra-ultra        
     
 She    
      
 -shifts her weight      
 -pulls her top and shakes        
 -pretends pretending to        
  read Women's era-        
     
 Probably bored beyond return she crosses her leg again-        
 checks her Tablet and goes on to stare in my direction      
 cause every other table is occupied and there is a couple      
 everywhere else        
     
 The whole place looks like a rotten-god-forsaken scam        
 from behind my dark glasses        
     
 I must not have blinked in five minutes cause she starts        
 to form a halo-steams up and I close my eyes finally as        
 two warm drops of tear fill in ancient billabong-succumbing         
 to gravity and in that moment I want to write a love poem    
 but it wont come to me which is just bad-almost acliche        
 the waiter brings my bill and hands me a tissue paper which        
 says-in-translucent-bright-pink-the-words-in-caps-f a g g o t-      
 may be maybelline.






Image courtesy-Patricia Carrol
Written by Whitewand6
Published | Edited 20th Apr 2012
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