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Darkness.
Darkness born of pleasure deep within a flesh embrace
Infiltration without murder sword of blood with seed of fate
Take me to the Darkness bring me where my soul belongs
Keep me in the shadows burning passions bright and strong.
Infiltration without murder sword of blood with seed of fate
Take me to the Darkness bring me where my soul belongs
Keep me in the shadows burning passions bright and strong.
Published 28th Jun 2023
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Born of lust then enslaved to it.
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21st Jul 2023 11:10pm
22nd Jul 2023 9:45am
1st Aug 2023 10:23pm
Darkness born and forever plunged into the flesh embrace...
Murder sword of blood wielding the seed of fate.... deep within...
Forever in the shadows where I belong, searing passions in my body...
Murder sword of blood wielding the seed of fate.... deep within...
Forever in the shadows where I belong, searing passions in my body...
2nd Aug 2023 7:44am
I think my Lady could use a cold shower to cool off a little. Here, let me use my body to lather you up, help you relieve the tension. 😉
4th Aug 2023 4:19am
4th Aug 2023 9:00am
13th Dec 2023 2:13pm
I think with this one you could have some fun playing with line breaks to create some rhythm and perhaps even play around with the reader’s interpretation. The first sentence is a good example where you can play with line breaks if you want.
“Darkness born of pleasure deep within a flesh embrace”
Could be
“Darkness born of pleasure
deep within a flesh embrace”
Or
“Darkness born of pleasure deep
within a flesh embrace”
In the second example, for me, the word deep links the two lines and connects ideas- pleasure is deep and so is the embrace.
If you are familiar with the song “Weak and Powerless” by A Perfect Circle, I get the same feeling from the lines.
“Someone feed the monkey while I
Dig in search of China
White as Dracula as I approach the bottom”
I way I hear it is both “China White (heroin)” and “white as Dracula”
Nice write ☠️
“Darkness born of pleasure deep within a flesh embrace”
Could be
“Darkness born of pleasure
deep within a flesh embrace”
Or
“Darkness born of pleasure deep
within a flesh embrace”
In the second example, for me, the word deep links the two lines and connects ideas- pleasure is deep and so is the embrace.
If you are familiar with the song “Weak and Powerless” by A Perfect Circle, I get the same feeling from the lines.
“Someone feed the monkey while I
Dig in search of China
White as Dracula as I approach the bottom”
I way I hear it is both “China White (heroin)” and “white as Dracula”
Nice write ☠️
Usually with my poetry I just jot it down as it comes, line for line as the words rise up from within the endless void that dwels within us all, like dropping a stone into an abandoned well then listening intently for the slitest sound echoing up from the deapths of obscurity. Only those echoes that reach the top are but a ghostly whisper, a reflection of the silent voice of my long tortured soul. 😁
29th Jan 2024 1:03pm
Greetings Mr. Peter Steele. Your poem is captivating. Hot & full of lust. Nicely done.
Anonymous
30th May 2024 2:13pm
Oh I love this !!!!
