Darkness.

Beautiful words. Hugs and peace to you. Oral

My Lord. (tips my hat to you)

Darkness born and forever plunged into the flesh embrace...
Murder sword of blood wielding the seed of fate.... deep within...
Forever in the shadows where I belong, searing passions in my body...

I think my Lady could use a cold shower to cool off a little. Here, let me use my body to lather you up, help you relieve the tension. 😉

Tight

Yes she was. 😜

I think with this one you could have some fun playing with line breaks to create some rhythm and perhaps even play around with the reader’s interpretation. The first sentence is a good example where you can play with line breaks if you want.

“Darkness born of pleasure deep within a flesh embrace”
Could be
“Darkness born of pleasure
deep within a flesh embrace”
Or
“Darkness born of pleasure deep
within a flesh embrace”

In the second example, for me, the word deep links the two lines and connects ideas- pleasure is deep and so is the embrace.

If you are familiar with the song “Weak and Powerless” by A Perfect Circle, I get the same feeling from the lines.
“Someone feed the monkey while I
Dig in search of China
White as Dracula as I approach the bottom”

I way I hear it is both “China White (heroin)”  and “white as Dracula”

Nice write ☠️

Usually  with my poetry I just jot it down as it comes, line for line as the words rise up from within the endless void that dwels within us all, like dropping a stone into an abandoned well then listening intently for the slitest sound echoing up from the deapths of obscurity. Only those echoes that reach the top are but a ghostly whisper, a reflection of the silent voice of my long tortured soul. 😁

Greetings Mr. Peter Steele. Your poem is captivating. Hot & full of lust. Nicely done.

Oh I love this !!!!