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Chat GPT Poem
on the road less travelled, in a moment so rare
fate wove its threads, two souls to ensnare
did god play his games to make us appear?
did destiny's whispers lead us here?
years had melted away, but we exchanged a smile
our hearts leapt with joy, a flame recompiled
in the midst of the crowd, we stood as one
a reunion destined, long overdue, yet begun
time had danced by, like petals in the breeze
and fate, in its whimsy, brought us to seize
time has passed by like breaths in the sleep
reunited in a coincidence our souls yearned for
our eyes locked in a dance, memories rekindled
like embers awakening, long dormant and kindled
in the depths of our gazes, a world was unveiled
untouched by time our connection prevailed
our conversations flowed like a familiar song
moments and stories retold before long
we spoke of the paths that life had taken
of dreams pursued, and hearts awakened
coffee wasn't enough for our stories
she invited me to her place to ease
as I stood at the door, nostalgia in my eyes
my memories awakened, a love that never dies
when I stepped in through an opulence
a richness to be adorned with every glance
I marvelled at the radiant and grand
she just smiled and took my hand
a symphony of colours defined her taste
I thought now I should leave in haste
she had won in her life for sure
I am still holding the folder of brochures
maybe she knew that I felt discomfort
she smiled and said "let's have a drink first"
the familiarity eased my tension
felt like she's never lost her affection
our laughter, our whispers, a tender symphony
wrapped in the tapestry of sweet destiny
shadows adorned her face, a veil to conceal
a truth yet untold, emotions to reveal
we danced in silence, a dance bittersweet
two souls reunited, yearning to meet
passion erupted like a blazing fire
as old love rekindled, burning with desire
our bodies entwined, like vines in the night
eclipsing the past, igniting the light
in a moment of bliss, their souls intertwined
I thought we were destined, our love realigned
in the hush of the moment, a symphony awakes,
as fingertips trace the contours, tenderly it takes.
a dance of anticipation, hearts drumming in sync,
as lips seek lips, in a fervent, yearning link.
the air is electric, charged with primal fire,
as bodies intertwine, fulfilling their deepest desire.
silken skin meets skin, in a sensuous ballet,
exploring every curve, as inhibitions sway.
sighs and whispers, a language understood,
in the rhythm of breaths, emotions unspool and flood.
moans escape, like melodies in the night,
echoing through the chambers, pure delight.
each touch, a spark, igniting flames within,
as passion blazes, casting shadows on the skin.
bodies arch and writhe, surrendering to the bliss,
in this sacred union, where souls find their abyss.
time becomes an illusion, lost in ecstasy's embrace,
as the world fades away, leaving only this space.
two beings, entangled, their desires intertwine,
as they ride the waves of pleasure, a symphony divine.
in the depths of intimacy, vulnerability blooms,
a merging of souls, banishing all earthly gloom.
with every thrust, they carve a tale untold,
of passion unbridled, a story to unfold.
in the crescendo of climax, they find release,
an explosion of ecstasy, a moment of pure peace.
bodies shudder and tremble, in rapturous delight,
as they bask in the afterglow, bodies alight.
suddenly a phone call, a cruel twist of fate
her words changed the space resonating its late
the room grew colder, and my heart shattered
I acted like I didn't hear it, though it mattered
again our eyes gazed, this time a confusion
I asked her again to clear my delusion
her voice trembled, as her head hung low
"I have a customer, you must go now"
Published 26th Jun 2023
Author's Note
I did not write this poem. The whole poem was written on ChatGPT. I just gave four prompts.
First departed lovers met after long years.
Second was how the boy marvelled at the long-departed lover's luxury apartment.
Third, they had passionate sex.
Fourth the girl suddenly asked the boy t leave saying she has a customer.
Then I re-arranged and few lines in between. But to be honest I don't feel anything for this poem.
This is just an experiment.
I like your opinions.
First departed lovers met after long years.
Second was how the boy marvelled at the long-departed lover's luxury apartment.
Third, they had passionate sex.
Fourth the girl suddenly asked the boy t leave saying she has a customer.
Then I re-arranged and few lines in between. But to be honest I don't feel anything for this poem.
This is just an experiment.
I like your opinions.
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27th Jun 2023 6:44am
Hey there, Vick
I experimented with ChatGPT and it's ability to write poetry a few months ago when there was someone on site using it without specifically saying so, to write his comments as well as his poems. I found that lack of disclosure irritating and akin to cheating. I understand being curious and using AI and it's interface to create but at the very least, have the decency to fully disclose that information, like you have here, with this piece.
This poem feels unlike you. Not that it's bad, it's pretty. I just feel like it's colder and devoid of your particular flair and awesome ability in conveying emotion. It's sort of a robotic construct of how poetry is 'supposed' to be written. You know how much I enjoy your style and poetic prowess, which to me, is head and shoulders above the ChatGPT version.
Thank you for sharing your experiment and curious nature. I found it interesting, indeed.
🌹💙 - B
I experimented with ChatGPT and it's ability to write poetry a few months ago when there was someone on site using it without specifically saying so, to write his comments as well as his poems. I found that lack of disclosure irritating and akin to cheating. I understand being curious and using AI and it's interface to create but at the very least, have the decency to fully disclose that information, like you have here, with this piece.
This poem feels unlike you. Not that it's bad, it's pretty. I just feel like it's colder and devoid of your particular flair and awesome ability in conveying emotion. It's sort of a robotic construct of how poetry is 'supposed' to be written. You know how much I enjoy your style and poetic prowess, which to me, is head and shoulders above the ChatGPT version.
Thank you for sharing your experiment and curious nature. I found it interesting, indeed.
🌹💙 - B
27th Jun 2023 10:47am
Hi B,
I was using AI image generators which was much advanced with techniques and effects. Mostly it will create abstract of your prompts. And the visual is appealing and convincing. But definitely it can't be applied to creative writing. Period!
And what you said is true, even I couldn't continued to read the full poem. And actually it generated three times more lines than I posted here. I didn't even want to post it as a poem here, but I couldn't find a forum to post such. But they were all felt lifeless and I couldn't put my name even I did like some lines.
And thank you, I appreciate and respect your feedbacks.
This will be the first and last poem I would try with AI that's for sure. What's the point of having 100s of lines without any feelings and satisfaction. I had much satisfaction writing 6 word poems 😄
But it was something to experience like, my brain was going in advance to create prompts. And navigate a story which was fun. Kinda felt like a movie director and chat gpt is the screenplay writer lol 😄
Cheers,
Vick
I was using AI image generators which was much advanced with techniques and effects. Mostly it will create abstract of your prompts. And the visual is appealing and convincing. But definitely it can't be applied to creative writing. Period!
And what you said is true, even I couldn't continued to read the full poem. And actually it generated three times more lines than I posted here. I didn't even want to post it as a poem here, but I couldn't find a forum to post such. But they were all felt lifeless and I couldn't put my name even I did like some lines.
And thank you, I appreciate and respect your feedbacks.
This will be the first and last poem I would try with AI that's for sure. What's the point of having 100s of lines without any feelings and satisfaction. I had much satisfaction writing 6 word poems 😄
But it was something to experience like, my brain was going in advance to create prompts. And navigate a story which was fun. Kinda felt like a movie director and chat gpt is the screenplay writer lol 😄
Cheers,
Vick
27th Jun 2023 7:15am
27th Jun 2023 10:48am
Haha, you should try atleast once, this was just 1/3 of the lines it actually generated 😄
8th Sep 2023 3:51pm
Interesting!! Never tried ChatGPT. Nah. I can't even try. Lol. Thanks for experiementing for us here at DUP. :)
