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Learning how to yell in tune
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Taking up the space that is mine
without shoving you
out of yours
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Taking up the space that is mine
without shoving you
out of yours
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It started as a joke about my singing....
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Re. Learning how to yell in tune
12th Jun 2023 8:12pm
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14th Jun 2023 00:17am
Re. Learning how to yell in tune
13th Jun 2023 3:59am
Holy shit, this title is everything.
And the poem.
It’s way bigger than three lines. How to maintain my autonomy without infringing on yours. My liberty ends at your door… I love it.
And the poem.
It’s way bigger than three lines. How to maintain my autonomy without infringing on yours. My liberty ends at your door… I love it.
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Re: Re. Learning how to yell in tune
14th Jun 2023 00:23am
Thank you for your enthusiasm!
I see a lot of self-help-y pop culture stuff about "taking up space" that is well meaning, but frankly rather aggressive. I believe there's enough oxygen for all of us.
Glad this connected with you!
❤️k
I see a lot of self-help-y pop culture stuff about "taking up space" that is well meaning, but frankly rather aggressive. I believe there's enough oxygen for all of us.
Glad this connected with you!
❤️k
Re. Learning how to yell in tune
13th Jun 2023 5:08pm
This is a huge lesson that I feel is so often overlooked in a relationship...possibly the point where it might/could be permanently detrimental.
What tremendous insight that just wallops you over the head with perfect common sense.... I really love how the idea was born out of a joke, morphing into what I feel is really profound!
Really impressive minimalism, k.
Thanks for putting it out there.
🌹B
What tremendous insight that just wallops you over the head with perfect common sense.... I really love how the idea was born out of a joke, morphing into what I feel is really profound!
Really impressive minimalism, k.
Thanks for putting it out there.
🌹B
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Re: Re. Learning how to yell in tune
14th Jun 2023 00:35am
Thanks, B! I love how deep thoughts can spring out of silly, off-hand comments.
Unfortunately, I think many relationships are unbalanced this way. For me, it's always been a struggle to live fully "out loud"... I think I was mostly trained not to step on toes. So, I'm learning...
❤️k
Unfortunately, I think many relationships are unbalanced this way. For me, it's always been a struggle to live fully "out loud"... I think I was mostly trained not to step on toes. So, I'm learning...
❤️k
Re. Learning how to yell in tune
15th Jun 2023 1:46am
Hell, own the room!
Personally, I am an absolute horrible (karaoke) singer. But once in awhile, someone dares me once too much to get up there and make an ass of myself. So I do that much pretty easily! Lol.
You are an actual musician and singer! Tell them all to back away and give you your stage!
And rock on!
Personally, I am an absolute horrible (karaoke) singer. But once in awhile, someone dares me once too much to get up there and make an ass of myself. So I do that much pretty easily! Lol.
You are an actual musician and singer! Tell them all to back away and give you your stage!
And rock on!
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Re: Re. Learning how to yell in tune
15th Jun 2023 2:36am
Thank you, Styx! Singing seems to have become my way out of the box. I'm getting pretty comfortable owning my stage now in music... other areas of life are still a work in progress, but I'm learning.
If I could find some karaoke here in my little town, I'd be all over it!! 😎
Appreciate your support, always.
❤️k
If I could find some karaoke here in my little town, I'd be all over it!! 😎
Appreciate your support, always.
❤️k
Re: Re. Learning how to yell in tune
15th Jun 2023 2:51am
How's that saying go? "You do you!". Life is supposed to have its fun times, too. Lord knows I've done some silly things, or something I suck at, all for the sake of the fun.
And, if it's honing a talent, like your singing, then it has its own obvious reward.
No one can stop our fun drive! Lol.
And, if it's honing a talent, like your singing, then it has its own obvious reward.
No one can stop our fun drive! Lol.
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Re: Re. Learning how to yell in tune
15th Jun 2023 2:56am
I'm having SO MUCH FUN with music. Today I blew off half my work day to sing a cheesy old love song. Here it is:
https://www.bandlab.com/post/4d810fce-d90a-ee11-907c-000d3a41ef61
There's no stopping me...
https://www.bandlab.com/post/4d810fce-d90a-ee11-907c-000d3a41ef61
There's no stopping me...
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