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Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
Look
I do pretty well
I'm rude, sexy and popular
But even I am not getting much traction
I see new and old poets alike
They get 0 to 4 comments on decent reads
That tells me the regulars are lazy
Can't blame the newbies
They are just getting started
This is a community
A lot of regulars have fallen away
It's up to us to save this dying site
The debt ceiling has been raised
You're safe for 2 years
Get off your ass and start participating
There's no charge to leave a comment
We all need validation
Get cracking for the newcomers
For the veterans
For Sanctity
My name is Poetspeak and I approve this
message
I do pretty well
I'm rude, sexy and popular
But even I am not getting much traction
I see new and old poets alike
They get 0 to 4 comments on decent reads
That tells me the regulars are lazy
Can't blame the newbies
They are just getting started
This is a community
A lot of regulars have fallen away
It's up to us to save this dying site
The debt ceiling has been raised
You're safe for 2 years
Get off your ass and start participating
There's no charge to leave a comment
We all need validation
Get cracking for the newcomers
For the veterans
For Sanctity
My name is Poetspeak and I approve this
message
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Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:04am
Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:10am
They always come because I treat them right ... Sometimes they come in multiples ..
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:07am
Veracity...I would like to say only one sentence that "people are leaving".. n you are absolutely right.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:11am
Thank you dimpy
You do a good job of commenting.
It doesn't take much time to read and comment a few a day ...
Thx
You do a good job of commenting.
It doesn't take much time to read and comment a few a day ...
Thx
Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:17am
thanks artist, i believe that to read and to encourage are a food for words. And we should not keep them hungry.!
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:20am
Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:30am
VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 2:33am
Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 2:43am
There are 2 choices here:
Apathy and Action
I choose Action
A vote for me is comments on your poems.
I look good in a suit too ..
Apathy and Action
I choose Action
A vote for me is comments on your poems.
I look good in a suit too ..
Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 2:53am
I do so enjoy a man in a suit.
Mr. Mayor, we need an interview before your relection.
I will vote for you. But the people have to know: Boxers or briefs?
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Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 3:00am
Under Armour Boxers with moisture wicking fabric and phenomenal adherence to man parts...
Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 3:07am
OK, serious note? Under Armour is the fucking best. Like, sports bras and warm up shit? THE BEST.
BACK TO THE INTERVIEW
Well said. We have no opposition. So next questions:
Does the toilet paper roll go over or under when replace?
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Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 6:23am
For 7 years I carried a roll
of toilet paper in my hand,
as I was in prison...
I paroled to my mom's house...
(It's okay...
My mom is totally cool and loves me... <#3)
But yes...
My instinct was to go "over", when
replacing TP...
My mom went under...
So I started going under...
_________________________
Pertaining to underwear...
I always wore boxers...
But have taken a liking to these bamboo
briefs...
The circulation is unparalleled...
:ppp
(Don't judge me...
But...
They feel a bit like llady's panties...
I rather like the word "panties"...
And panties, in generall...
Hehe...)
But seriously...
I do have a bit of a lingerie fetish...
of toilet paper in my hand,
as I was in prison...
I paroled to my mom's house...
(It's okay...
My mom is totally cool and loves me... <#3)
But yes...
My instinct was to go "over", when
replacing TP...
My mom went under...
So I started going under...
_________________________
Pertaining to underwear...
I always wore boxers...
But have taken a liking to these bamboo
briefs...
The circulation is unparalleled...
:ppp
(Don't judge me...
But...
They feel a bit like llady's panties...
I rather like the word "panties"...
And panties, in generall...
Hehe...)
But seriously...
I do have a bit of a lingerie fetish...
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Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 11:49am
When I replace the roll of said paper I pull from under. It's an agility pull and less cumbersome than the over pull ...
Hence no waste ...
Fiscally sound !
Hence no waste ...
Fiscally sound !
Re: VOTE POET SPEAK FOR MAYOR
6th Jun 2023 11:53am
I like the word panties too, so feminine.
A man without access to quality women and their panties is lost.
I will study the bamboo briefs you mention.
Circulation. Is everything downtown ....
Thank you for participating in this debate Cipher.
Appreciate, glad you're out of the Joint !!
A man without access to quality women and their panties is lost.
I will study the bamboo briefs you mention.
Circulation. Is everything downtown ....
Thank you for participating in this debate Cipher.
Appreciate, glad you're out of the Joint !!
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:52am
“Rude, sexy and popular”
I knew there was a reason I liked you.
Amen to all that, Gary
A comment a day keeps stagnation at bay. This site needs to get moving and grooving back to the correct direction - forward.
Have a fanfuckingtastic evening.
I knew there was a reason I liked you.
Amen to all that, Gary
A comment a day keeps stagnation at bay. This site needs to get moving and grooving back to the correct direction - forward.
Have a fanfuckingtastic evening.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 3:02am
Rude, crude, lewd too
I tell everyone a few comments a day goes a long way. Newbies won't stick around if we don't support them into regular contributions ..
I tell everyone a few comments a day goes a long way. Newbies won't stick around if we don't support them into regular contributions ..
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 2:55am
Guilty, I'm a fuck bag. Sometimes I need to go into dark mode. I'll be back.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 3:03am
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 4:30am
Dear PS,
Bravo. Well said. So true, so many good poets lost in the shuffle. Let’s hope this call rallies the troops. I’m ready for active duty.
H🌷
Bravo. Well said. So true, so many good poets lost in the shuffle. Let’s hope this call rallies the troops. I’m ready for active duty.
H🌷
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
6th Jun 2023 11:56am
Dear H,
Nobody can blame you Honoria.
You are gracious, kind, warm and honoring to all poets you comment on. We need more like you on the site to keep this place thriving as it once did.
Thank you for your service, you're a shining star 🌟 !!
🤠❤💯💥
Nobody can blame you Honoria.
You are gracious, kind, warm and honoring to all poets you comment on. We need more like you on the site to keep this place thriving as it once did.
Thank you for your service, you're a shining star 🌟 !!
🤠❤💯💥
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
Hey don’t be blaming the vets… if anything I’m a serial over-sharer in comments 😂
Although I’ve never been a comment counter (I mean… you either like me or you don’t) I can’t help but feel that social media has developed this “like” culture, where people can click a button, but they have this inability to explain WHY it is they like it.
People always say that it’s their poetry that helps them to grow. I disagree — it’s commenting. It builds critical thinking. It develops a sense of style. It teaches us what we like and what we don’t like.
I’d rather get two good comments where people actually said what they did and didn’t like about a piece or how it made them feel over “nice poem!” any day… that shit kills me.
Viva la revolution.
-M
Although I’ve never been a comment counter (I mean… you either like me or you don’t) I can’t help but feel that social media has developed this “like” culture, where people can click a button, but they have this inability to explain WHY it is they like it.
People always say that it’s their poetry that helps them to grow. I disagree — it’s commenting. It builds critical thinking. It develops a sense of style. It teaches us what we like and what we don’t like.
I’d rather get two good comments where people actually said what they did and didn’t like about a piece or how it made them feel over “nice poem!” any day… that shit kills me.
Viva la revolution.
-M
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
Dear M,
I totally agree with your comment.
It's what people say about your writing that helps you grow as a poet. I like when people take the time to tell me they had a visceral reaction to what I wrote. Good or Bad.
I was glad when the Web Mistress took on the RL madness. There were some who used their avatar as some kind of stamp of approval and left no comments at all. I call that "Billboarding". The reading list is useful but needed to be reigned in and not used as a popularity tool. Hail to the Web Mistress on that subject.
This is the dawn of you and I commenting on each other. I took a chance. I believe you had me blocked in your previous time here.
I never knew why, perhaps it was my content but you're back and I appreciate your comments. I like your take no prisoners attitude. I do the same.
Thanks for your comment 👍
PS aka 🤠
I totally agree with your comment.
It's what people say about your writing that helps you grow as a poet. I like when people take the time to tell me they had a visceral reaction to what I wrote. Good or Bad.
I was glad when the Web Mistress took on the RL madness. There were some who used their avatar as some kind of stamp of approval and left no comments at all. I call that "Billboarding". The reading list is useful but needed to be reigned in and not used as a popularity tool. Hail to the Web Mistress on that subject.
This is the dawn of you and I commenting on each other. I took a chance. I believe you had me blocked in your previous time here.
I never knew why, perhaps it was my content but you're back and I appreciate your comments. I like your take no prisoners attitude. I do the same.
Thanks for your comment 👍
PS aka 🤠
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Jun 2023 3:30am
Literally all my "trophies" in here are for top commenting. I do try to stop by when I can.
But, too many writers in here are strictly just posting a write and then they're signing off. I make a note of who doesn't at least say thanks if i leave them a comment. I move on.
Everyone should make an effort to interact somewhat. It's proper.
Plus, I admit that I use comments to keep track of some others, like a friendly reminder. It's an acknowledgement of sorts.
I'm not here to actually critique anyone "for real". I'm not qualified at all. I just enjoy the camaraderie of writing.
But, too many writers in here are strictly just posting a write and then they're signing off. I make a note of who doesn't at least say thanks if i leave them a comment. I move on.
Everyone should make an effort to interact somewhat. It's proper.
Plus, I admit that I use comments to keep track of some others, like a friendly reminder. It's an acknowledgement of sorts.
I'm not here to actually critique anyone "for real". I'm not qualified at all. I just enjoy the camaraderie of writing.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Jun 2023 11:25am
Hey Styx
Good morning
Yeah, we speak the same language of manners. Unfortunately in some realms manners might be fading fast. Hope Ai doesn't take them away completely. I try to read and comment frequently. New and veteran writers. We are a community with realism, fantasy and warts too. Gotta take the good with the bad. I publish my fuck bag reminders as part public service and part humor. Baseball bats not allowed.
Appreciated your visit and comments always.
Thanks !!
Good morning
Yeah, we speak the same language of manners. Unfortunately in some realms manners might be fading fast. Hope Ai doesn't take them away completely. I try to read and comment frequently. New and veteran writers. We are a community with realism, fantasy and warts too. Gotta take the good with the bad. I publish my fuck bag reminders as part public service and part humor. Baseball bats not allowed.
Appreciated your visit and comments always.
Thanks !!
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Jun 2023 9:03pm
Dam NYers always complaining about something.
Here's your comment, "A Bronx Cheer"! LOL.
Excellent public service announcement. Big game in Miami tonight.
Here's your comment, "A Bronx Cheer"! LOL.
Excellent public service announcement. Big game in Miami tonight.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Jun 2023 9:07pm
Yeah
Call me BIG MOUTH
You get a pass Leo, you're a good citizen
Should be another war tonight
Call me BIG MOUTH
You get a pass Leo, you're a good citizen
Should be another war tonight
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
8th Jun 2023 5:46pm
This is true. There have been times when I particpated too much and made my self ill. (There is a joke in there somewhere.)
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
8th Jun 2023 5:53pm
We the poets can only save DUP.
Apathy will not cut it ...
It's deathly quiet in the Swamp lately, maybe the robots have fallen asleep ...
Apathy will not cut it ...
It's deathly quiet in the Swamp lately, maybe the robots have fallen asleep ...
Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
9th Jun 2023 5:42pm
I hear you. I view it as a cavern of emerald. Where poets fill up the mines with poems. I am optimistic. There are theorys of expand and contract. Maybee it will expand again.
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Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
You don't speak for me as I don't speak for you. I know you understand this message & I also know, like you, that your statement will only prick the conscience of the few. We are, after all, creatures of habit. I am not 'having a go' because you raise a valid point. Funny how some poets get 40+ comments though. I wonder how many of those are genuine or just submitted out of loyalty. This just makes me sound bitter... Maybe like you too. 😜😝
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
18th Jun 2023 11:42pm
A lot of poets from say a year ago bolted to other pastures so readership and comments are way down. Those who remain like you or me are left to remind people that comments induce engagement and validation so do more or else this community will cease to exist. I try to comment daily. I'm on a self imposed writing sabbatical so you won't see my poems for awhile. I'm still writing them and saving them but it will be mid July before I post my magic or vitriol again. Hey I got 1900 plus poems already posted, you fuck bags won't go hungry just look back ...
Appreciate your comment son ...
Appreciate your comment son ...
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
25th Jun 2023 10:21pm
Not sure what was going on around the beginning of the month but there was a lot of less activity all around, not just from comments but from submissions as well. It seems to be picking up now, but I'm glad you're the voice of reason to light a fire under asses.
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
25th Jun 2023 10:30pm
As the unelected Sheriff and Mayor I take it upon myself to scold the flock. It was death quiet for quite a while but I'm happy to see some familiar faces back.
It takes a village fir sure Wally
BIG THANKS for always participating grandly ...
It takes a village fir sure Wally
BIG THANKS for always participating grandly ...
Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Aug 2023 10:13pm
Ive never been a cool kid round theses part, PS but you know me, Ill always fucking comment when its well deserved! Love you!
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Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
7th Aug 2023 10:20pm
You're plenty cool ML
The fact that you don't think you're cool makes you cooler !!
Kinda like Bowie
He hated fame but fame claimed him every place he went. I understand he had good manners. He lived here in NYC. Lore goes he dressed in disguises but everyone knew it was him and made believe they didn't know... but they did...
Keep rocking ML
X
The fact that you don't think you're cool makes you cooler !!
Kinda like Bowie
He hated fame but fame claimed him every place he went. I understand he had good manners. He lived here in NYC. Lore goes he dressed in disguises but everyone knew it was him and made believe they didn't know... but they did...
Keep rocking ML
X
Re: Re. Listen Up Fuck Bags ...Poems and Poets Need Comments
Aw shucks, thanks babe, however I do not compare to Bowie. Hes a legend. Im back! <3
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7th Aug 2023 10:24pm
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7th Aug 2023 10:27pm