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CROWN MADE OF TEARS
In the deep end of my heart
A gloaming cold river streams
Icy water that only flows in the dark
Where I keep my special dreams
Royal to it's throne exquisite art
Hear echoes of memories that sustain
The past without a name
Pure happiness now a beautiful pain
I want it to downpour tons of rain
Caress my agonizing brain
I only want to know if my king has finally came!!!
If only there be hope but only gets caliginous
No care cause the vicious despair
Waiting on downhearted wishes
Closing my swollen eyes I see his stare
And as I open them he vanishes
Into thin air....
I can't be anywhere but there
It is where....
I belong.....
Hearing music of misery songs
For how long???
Dry it before I drown
I cry myself to death
I must be a queen cause I wear a crown
It's made of tears holding it with just my breath
There is no sun or moon that goes up or down
See me wear this long train river gown
Hold my hand and save me baby
Don't let it kill me
Come with your sun
Gun me your love before I'm gone
Baby Hold me to forever
Don't let it become a never
Come with your sun
Let's run with love before I'm gone
Crown made of tears, sapphire blue
Each droplet a reminder of sorrow and rue
A weight on my head, heavy and true
But beauty and strength it imbues
For every tear is a testament
To the courage within my spirit's firmament
Broken heart pieces found under water
Heavy gravity and its getting deeper
I release many tears they go further
I'm waiting for you to be near
Waiting in this dour circle
Too numb to feel fear
If only there be hope but only gets caliginous
No care cause the vicious despair
Waiting on downhearted wishes
Closing my swollen eyes I see his stare
And as I open them he vanishes
Into thin air.....
I can't be anywhere but there
It is where....
I belong.....
Hearing music of misery songs
For how long?
Dry it before I drown
I cry myself to death
I must be a queen cause I wear a crown
It's made of tears holding it with just my breath
There is no sun or moon that goes up or down
See me wear this long train river gown
A gloaming cold river streams
Icy water that only flows in the dark
Where I keep my special dreams
Royal to it's throne exquisite art
Hear echoes of memories that sustain
The past without a name
Pure happiness now a beautiful pain
I want it to downpour tons of rain
Caress my agonizing brain
I only want to know if my king has finally came!!!
If only there be hope but only gets caliginous
No care cause the vicious despair
Waiting on downhearted wishes
Closing my swollen eyes I see his stare
And as I open them he vanishes
Into thin air....
I can't be anywhere but there
It is where....
I belong.....
Hearing music of misery songs
For how long???
Dry it before I drown
I cry myself to death
I must be a queen cause I wear a crown
It's made of tears holding it with just my breath
There is no sun or moon that goes up or down
See me wear this long train river gown
Hold my hand and save me baby
Don't let it kill me
Come with your sun
Gun me your love before I'm gone
Baby Hold me to forever
Don't let it become a never
Come with your sun
Let's run with love before I'm gone
Crown made of tears, sapphire blue
Each droplet a reminder of sorrow and rue
A weight on my head, heavy and true
But beauty and strength it imbues
For every tear is a testament
To the courage within my spirit's firmament
Broken heart pieces found under water
Heavy gravity and its getting deeper
I release many tears they go further
I'm waiting for you to be near
Waiting in this dour circle
Too numb to feel fear
If only there be hope but only gets caliginous
No care cause the vicious despair
Waiting on downhearted wishes
Closing my swollen eyes I see his stare
And as I open them he vanishes
Into thin air.....
I can't be anywhere but there
It is where....
I belong.....
Hearing music of misery songs
For how long?
Dry it before I drown
I cry myself to death
I must be a queen cause I wear a crown
It's made of tears holding it with just my breath
There is no sun or moon that goes up or down
See me wear this long train river gown
Published 5th Jun 2023
| Edited 7th Jun 2023
Author's Note
WROTE THESE LYRICS PRETTY FAST AND LOVE IT. MY INSOIRATION IS MY LONG DISTSNCE BF I MISS AND WISH TO HEAR HIS VOICE AGAIN.
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6th Jun 2023 00:53am
Time heals all wounds. When the time is right you find love. Keep on writing.
6th Jun 2023 2:30am
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17th Jun 2023 9:55pm
18th Jun 2023 3:51am
I'm falling too, I'll try to hunt in the files, there should be a "black fog" somewhere
18th Jun 2023 3:53am
I found it.
INSIDE ROARE
Black Mist (Solitude)
In the labyrinth of everyday life
where everything turns monotonously.
Like a scratched record on an old gramophone.
Come with an apology when it's not enough
when he leaves iiii aaa للل
Helplessness stares at you from four gray walls,
dusk is quietly falling outside the window.
That's how dark your soul is. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
You replay everything in the maze of your own thoughts
and you don't know where it starts and ends.
It looks like a silent movie to you
so twisted, like life, like a lie to the face. iiii aaa للل
None of the four old keys fit the door,
when she slammed the door, I can't get out.
There is only black fog. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
INSIDE ROARE
Black Mist (Solitude)
In the labyrinth of everyday life
where everything turns monotonously.
Like a scratched record on an old gramophone.
Come with an apology when it's not enough
when he leaves iiii aaa للل
Helplessness stares at you from four gray walls,
dusk is quietly falling outside the window.
That's how dark your soul is. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
You replay everything in the maze of your own thoughts
and you don't know where it starts and ends.
It looks like a silent movie to you
so twisted, like life, like a lie to the face. iiii aaa للل
None of the four old keys fit the door,
when she slammed the door, I can't get out.
There is only black fog. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
18th Jun 2023 10:16am
It's still there, I'll probably cancel the account, it's not worth it.
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I'll wait for your advice if you can help me, otherwise I'm leaving. And believe me, it hurts quite a bit. Damn admins.
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I'll wait for your advice if you can help me, otherwise I'm leaving. And believe me, it hurts quite a bit. Damn admins.
19th Jun 2023 7:15pm
19th Jun 2023 7:20pm
Please yes, I have a lot of text here, I just can't publish it.
Good day, I finally see you ON.
Good day, I finally see you ON.
19th Jun 2023 11:37pm
11th Jul 2023 1:03pm
This poem really captures the intense emotions and inner strength that can arise during our most difficult times. The imagery is powerful and it's clear that the longing for love and hope is deeply felt. The crown made of tears is a strong symbol of resilience and the ability to find something beautiful even in painful experiences. It serves as a touching reminder that we all possess courage deep within ourselves.
12th Jul 2023 8:45am
Awew thank you for liking my dark love poem. I really appreciate it.
8th Sep 2023 7:15pm
