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Until We Are Gone

around and around and around and around
never an ending, never a sound
never a stop, never standing still
thought streams in eddie's beginning to spill

just like the Sun in the galaxy
Earth hanging on as off we all flee
swirling through space while spinning around
around and around and around and around -

up and down up and down up and down up and down
emotional moments in which we can drown
always rising, then ebbing away
emotion's an ocean In which to play

loving you loving me loving you loving me
loving loving a feeling ecstatically
exploding inside us and all around
and around all the places where we are found -

breathing in, breathing out, then breathing back in
the rhythm of life now echoing
in the love that we feel, the love that we give
breathing in, breathing out is the reason we live

spinning 'round and around as we swirl
and we twist
with the Sun deep in space by the universe kissed
feeling feelings then moving along
and along and along until we are gone...
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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