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1st Jun 2023 12:49pm
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1st Jun 2023 1:39pm
I see quiet reserve in your face and that is aura a man like me thrives on ....
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1st Jun 2023 1:43pm
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1st Jun 2023 3:56pm
I love that the wonderful ambiguity of the poem. Who are you talking to? “Your thirst “ could be interpreted in a few ways (at least that is where my mind went). “Your” could be a part of yourself that needs release though writing (one of my major motivations for writing). “Your “ could be a particular person that you write to (a distance romance)? “Your “ could be all of your readers (seemingly the interpretation of many commenters). All of the interpretations give a different feel to the poem. Thank you for sharing- fun to dive into such a seemingly simple piece. 🌹
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Re: Re. quench
1st Jun 2023 5:23pm
Thank you for understanding my poetry so deeply. Mainly this is written for someone I don't know but i love. I want someone in my life..not for long life ha ha..😀 Well thank you so much for your detailed comment.
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That adds another fun, interesting dimension to the poem. 🌹
PS. I see that many people on DU use a rose emoji as a kind of “like/live” symbol for approval of a poem or comment- this is the way I am using it.
PS. I see that many people on DU use a rose emoji as a kind of “like/live” symbol for approval of a poem or comment- this is the way I am using it.
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2nd Jun 2023 7:17am
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1st Jun 2023 11:00pm
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2nd Jun 2023 7:19am
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2nd Jun 2023 7:40am
Keep pouring the words into our glasses :) We'll keep drinking 'em in :)
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Re: Re. quench
2nd Jun 2023 10:10am
Yeaah sure, I will enjoy drinking you my feelings through my words. thanks for this lovely feedback! i liked.
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