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"Blue-Thirty"
in that stillness
streams of blue
fiter through
breathing in
a new morning
of hope
recounting
unconscious
dreams of love
holding
her heart
with a deep sigh
remembering
the feeling
oh so well
cuddling
her pillow
tight
as if it
were her
romantic
fated...
lover
streams of blue
fiter through
breathing in
a new morning
of hope
recounting
unconscious
dreams of love
holding
her heart
with a deep sigh
remembering
the feeling
oh so well
cuddling
her pillow
tight
as if it
were her
romantic
fated...
lover
Published 31st May 2023
Author's Note
title came from a comment a poetess from DUP on a poem she read
this title gave inspiration to write this
was gonna let lie in my poetic shed
this title gave inspiration to write this
was gonna let lie in my poetic shed
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31st May 2023 3:07pm
31st May 2023 3:25pm
thank you for the heart
you know I will look after it
not throw it about like I do mine lol
you know I will look after it
not throw it about like I do mine lol
31st May 2023 3:34pm
31st May 2023 3:52pm
Hello AspergerPoet56,
How R Things?
This is a very inspiring pen.
Soft and tender, 4 anyone that reads.
Leaves one feeling warm.
The gentle flow,like a emotive love song,
And the format,is exquisite.
Take care.
X
How R Things?
This is a very inspiring pen.
Soft and tender, 4 anyone that reads.
Leaves one feeling warm.
The gentle flow,like a emotive love song,
And the format,is exquisite.
Take care.
X
31st May 2023 3:55pm
I'm plodding along thanks
such a warm comment
made my skip
and ego jump for joy lol
such a warm comment
made my skip
and ego jump for joy lol
31st May 2023 5:19pm
31st May 2023 5:49pm
31st May 2023 9:15pm
1st Jun 2023 00:04am
I love cuddling, under the right circumstances. I always appreciate the vulnerability you expose.
I appreciate you, Colin. You were the first person that helped me when I joined DUP and I’ll never forget it.
Have a great night.
I appreciate you, Colin. You were the first person that helped me when I joined DUP and I’ll never forget it.
Have a great night.
7th Jun 2023 4:50pm
i didnt do much
just a welcome
maybe answered a couple of questions
if that
just a welcome
maybe answered a couple of questions
if that
