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Rain Waters
the where i rest
in her eyes there 's a place
there's an ocean of trance
in her eyes there's a flatness
life dies in velvet quietness
rains refresh the thirsty nomad
revive the dead leaves of the orchard
when she pours her looks into my desert
in the beastly world, there's a Beauty
not a simple human
a particular woman
the treat of my craving desire
there's a golden treasure
a body of pleasure
a heart beyond any measure
poetess, a hurtful teaser
she treats with less care
a man who does really care
in loves creed its not fair
when the feelings laid bare
so, let's share one and only one skin
of you and me and no one between
in such love there is no age
if we have eight or eighteen
let"s behave like a child
innocent, yet wild
let's behave like old
if hope to live, we still hold
this is chemistry
a twin soul's harmony
a magnetic alchemy
a spiritual interaction
in her eyes there 's a place
there's an ocean of trance
in her eyes there's a flatness
life dies in velvet quietness
rains refresh the thirsty nomad
revive the dead leaves of the orchard
when she pours her looks into my desert
in the beastly world, there's a Beauty
not a simple human
a particular woman
the treat of my craving desire
there's a golden treasure
a body of pleasure
a heart beyond any measure
poetess, a hurtful teaser
she treats with less care
a man who does really care
in loves creed its not fair
when the feelings laid bare
so, let's share one and only one skin
of you and me and no one between
in such love there is no age
if we have eight or eighteen
let"s behave like a child
innocent, yet wild
let's behave like old
if hope to live, we still hold
this is chemistry
a twin soul's harmony
a magnetic alchemy
a spiritual interaction
Published 31st May 2023
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1st Jun 2023 5:02am
I am always drawn to alluring words; whereas, if I was to close my eyes, I can still savor the flavor of them as they entertainment my intellect, and this gem from the first line, held my attention, throughout each stanza, each line brought your closer, and closer to the cerebral serene of contentment in the end.
Good morning, to you, my poet, and please continue to enjoy your Thursday in all that you do.
Good morning, to you, my poet, and please continue to enjoy your Thursday in all that you do.
1st Jun 2023 2:23pm
Good Morning dear friend, its what i do aim, brain serenity and tranquility of the heart.. from Nature we can draw our wisdom, and transmit to those who are open minded, and prone to see beauty
in words..Trying to feel what everybody can feel is my prime concern, so its totally normal what you feel, its what i strive to reach thru my life, thru my tiresome research. Reaching the biggest range of people and give them what they need..Spiritual serenity is a rare goal and hard to attain !!! in these depressive time, where few do care about mountains, and joyful rides outside the busy hustle and bustle of noisy agglomerations..
So happy you adorned my page with your words! stay safe, happiness to your soul.. calm to your spirit.....
in words..Trying to feel what everybody can feel is my prime concern, so its totally normal what you feel, its what i strive to reach thru my life, thru my tiresome research. Reaching the biggest range of people and give them what they need..Spiritual serenity is a rare goal and hard to attain !!! in these depressive time, where few do care about mountains, and joyful rides outside the busy hustle and bustle of noisy agglomerations..
So happy you adorned my page with your words! stay safe, happiness to your soul.. calm to your spirit.....
2nd Jun 2023 8:04pm
'Spiritual serenity is a rare goal and hard to attain !!!'
It is not hard to attain, my poet, I will say its moreso, hard to search for the enlightenment of its truth.
I say that in a respectable manner, meaning we become divided in the common goal to reach the divinity by heart, and mind, to give credence to our soul we will assume our religion is more superior than others.
To get to that spiritual rebirth is free and if you find that peace in your heart, who am I or anyone to say the Creator is not within or where it roams.
The core of divine growth and development is not find in a temple,a mosque, it is always find in the scriptures of the heart, and what ears half hear, and what the eyes all see.
Thank you for allowing me to explain my analogy and have great Friday and a relaxing, yet proper weekend.
It is not hard to attain, my poet, I will say its moreso, hard to search for the enlightenment of its truth.
I say that in a respectable manner, meaning we become divided in the common goal to reach the divinity by heart, and mind, to give credence to our soul we will assume our religion is more superior than others.
To get to that spiritual rebirth is free and if you find that peace in your heart, who am I or anyone to say the Creator is not within or where it roams.
The core of divine growth and development is not find in a temple,a mosque, it is always find in the scriptures of the heart, and what ears half hear, and what the eyes all see.
Thank you for allowing me to explain my analogy and have great Friday and a relaxing, yet proper weekend.
