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The One Who Listens
To the one who listens
You've heard me cry all my life
Be angry and bitter at it all
But you're still passively there
You could change it all but you won't
Why change anything when it's entertaining?
You've heard me cry all my life
Be angry and bitter at it all
But you're still passively there
You could change it all but you won't
Why change anything when it's entertaining?
Published 24th May 2023
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24th May 2023 7:06am
these lines are a kicker....
You could change it all but you won't
Why change anything when it's entertaining?
You could change it all but you won't
Why change anything when it's entertaining?
I've been trying to write shorter and more concise. A lot of my poems are that way with a ton of filler so I'm removing some of that filler.
24th May 2023 4:15pm
