Fulsome Voyeur

"Present witness Hail to the dawning of odes seep through the rile of desire in fire and filth Poisoning the spades Widowing the stones."  That, in itself, is a very "graven" image, to me.  This is quite a depiction of some of the most heinous and evil act that there is.  You really capture the emotion of that evil and use very detailed and definitive words, unique, individual, and original to you, to drive the point home.  The transitions are solid too, between the three parts.  The ending is almost disturbing to me, heh.  Anyway, thanks for sharing.  You're certainly versatile in capturing just about any "scene" with your writing.  Looking forward to reading more from you.

I appreciate your feedback. I’m not sure where this came from. I’ve never been through this situation though I imagine it would be terrifying. Just the violation of the act is haunting to me.

Very good poem, Everavalon.
Exquisite verses.
My favorite lines:
"... Hail to the dawning of odes... "
"... Widowing the stones ... "

Thank you for stopping by. I’ll be sure to check out some of your poems as well.

You're welcome, Everavalon.