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Queen
Broken shoulders of this
Fierce Queen that
Built a dynasty
She craves her own
Territory
A small piece
Under a canopy she
Can claim as her own
She’s tired of being needed
By ungrateful people
Longing to just sit
Beside her true loves
Her sun
Her moon
Her star
Her sky
Her babies
Babies
Fierce Queen that
Built a dynasty
She craves her own
Territory
A small piece
Under a canopy she
Can claim as her own
She’s tired of being needed
By ungrateful people
Longing to just sit
Beside her true loves
Her sun
Her moon
Her star
Her sky
Her babies
Babies
Published 19th May 2023
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20th May 2023 00:42am
Dear Tommie Lynn,
I am absolutely thrilled to read a new poem by you. I have missed you very much. I really feel this piece. I love the profound simplicity of your tire loves. Welcome back my friend❣
I am absolutely thrilled to read a new poem by you. I have missed you very much. I really feel this piece. I love the profound simplicity of your tire loves. Welcome back my friend❣
Sounds like you're describing an older family woman enjoying a lounge on the deck during a cruise (have just been saying FB pics from a friend on a cruise in the Pacific) she wouldn't have been able to enjoy at home.
25th Feb 2024 2:16am
Loved the overall feeling in this, as some of us are beginning to be empty nesters, we long for those days when they were small and needed us.
Beautiful work. Hope you are doing well
Beautiful work. Hope you are doing well
