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The Journey
In the throws of youth there is a constant storm
A hurricane of unrelenting confusion, and frustration
Deafening thunder roars, and fierce gales screech
How can one see the path, when it keeps getting blown away?
A wall of manipulation separates their eyes from the beauty beyond the monsoon
Anxiety takes hold, along with its companion claustrophobia
To find shelter, you must seek to find the eye of the storm
The center of the chaos, which is calm
For that is where you will find your own center
You've been seeking what is beyond, while overlooking what is within
The piece of yourself In the middle of it all
Seek the elegance of the present
To weather the storm you must walk through it
Braving it's ferocious force
You must find the eye of the storm
A hurricane of unrelenting confusion, and frustration
Deafening thunder roars, and fierce gales screech
How can one see the path, when it keeps getting blown away?
A wall of manipulation separates their eyes from the beauty beyond the monsoon
Anxiety takes hold, along with its companion claustrophobia
To find shelter, you must seek to find the eye of the storm
The center of the chaos, which is calm
For that is where you will find your own center
You've been seeking what is beyond, while overlooking what is within
The piece of yourself In the middle of it all
Seek the elegance of the present
To weather the storm you must walk through it
Braving it's ferocious force
You must find the eye of the storm
Published 15th May 2023
Author's Note
As a young adult I find myself lost many times on my journey of life. Always focused on the future, not the present. A job, school, finding someone, and much more. I didn't leave room for the people around me. I'm still trying to find that introspective balance.
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15th May 2023 4:24pm
So empowering, this is a great piece of poetry.
I'm further along in age than you, and I'm only just now learning to embrace the present moment now.
I'm further along in age than you, and I'm only just now learning to embrace the present moment now.
15th May 2023 5:02pm
It's difficult indeed. Many times I have to remind myself to take a step back and relax. It will all work out the way it's meant to in the end:)
15th May 2023 8:08pm
There is a quote - fate laughs that we had a plan.
I believe every thing has a reason and connection.
Have a great day!
I believe every thing has a reason and connection.
Have a great day!
16th May 2023 3:42am
Dear CC,
That you are aware of needing to find balance puts you light years ahead of your contemporaries. For me, your poem reminds me how difficult it is to be human. Each stage of life has its own challenges but wisdom I think, is the greatest gift. Sounds like you have been granted that. Your poem is very thoughtful and reflective. H🌷
That you are aware of needing to find balance puts you light years ahead of your contemporaries. For me, your poem reminds me how difficult it is to be human. Each stage of life has its own challenges but wisdom I think, is the greatest gift. Sounds like you have been granted that. Your poem is very thoughtful and reflective. H🌷
I thank you for the flattering words. I'm at a weird stage in my life, especially my age. I keep hearing "Your still young, live a little" or "You need to act like an adult now". I've learned that it doesn't have to be just one or the other, but a fine harmony between both.
Glad you liked my poem:)
Glad you liked my poem:)
