Blue

Nice!
Very clever, using the "salted with pain" after the ocean line (Saltwater).

This is a great read, and I was hoping for more, because it kept me interested (easily).

Well done, Debbie.

Thank you so much. I would like to write some lengthier poems.
Thx for stopping bye, have a peaceful night 🌙

this one is so sweet

Thank you!
You are sweet too. 😊

This is a cascading wonder that uses perfect brevity to instill this almost sinfully intimate and viscerally palpable sense of lustful obsession...

I very much enjoyed the minimalistic take, here. To me, it accentuates in such an apropos way.

Terrific work, dear Debbie!
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Wow, thank you so much! I'll be smiling all day after your nice comments.
Obsession - one of my fav things to write about, lol. I have had a few grand ones.

Have an amazing day 💙

Drowning in another's soul and awakening to love is a testament to poetic creation.

Why hello! Thanks for your thoughts, I appreciate them.

Deep emotions from the heart.   💙
There's something about blue eyes that leave me in complete awe.  
(I've scribbled a few lines about eyes of blue).  That sweet ache.

You've created a masterpiece !  This is beautiful, tender and emotional.  

I can get lost in blue eyes too, lol.
Thank you so much for your kind comments. 💜

Your comment made me so happy!
Thank you very much.

Good job very heavy hearted and raw

I consider "raw" a great compliment. Thank you so much for reading.

The Opioid metaphor really puts it into perspective.  It's like you've entrusted your hope in a flame about to burn out, and leave you withered.  Anyway, as always, you have good, creative language here.  The concept and metaphors take a concise, compacted meaning of course in direction.  You can certainly carry a theme unique to your own skillset.  Anyway, I look forward to reading more of your work!

Thank you so much for your input!

So eloquent and deep. Pure magic in words. Peace to you..

Thank you so much. That comment made my morning. 😊
Have a nice day.