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Sibilate
Trees possess longings too.
For the ecstatic torment of a voracious
spring breeze.
For the whoosh and wobbling murmurings
of sun bright leaves.
Spring whispers her secrets to summer,
all her sultry needs.
For the ecstatic torment of a voracious
spring breeze.
For the whoosh and wobbling murmurings
of sun bright leaves.
Spring whispers her secrets to summer,
all her sultry needs.
Published 14th May 2023
Author's Note
Just enjoying a breeze.
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14th May 2023 9:42pm
14th May 2023 10:29pm
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15th May 2023 3:41am
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15th May 2023 3:56am
Nature is my greatest inspiration. There was a gorgeous, voluptuous breeze here today. I always have thought of trees as whispering ancient wisdom.
Thank you for your nice comments. 💜
Thank you for your nice comments. 💜
15th May 2023 5:00pm
If the world could be like nature the soft winds of Autumn would forever blow. Good poem.
15th May 2023 7:18pm
16th May 2023 3:08am
Your use of alliteration really makes your pieces special. There's a little ... lift ... to them.
Great stuff, D-bear
16th May 2023 9:43am
Thank you so much Betty.
I think you are a fantastic writer so your comments on little old me, lol, make me feel fabulous.
Sending you love 💜
I think you are a fantastic writer so your comments on little old me, lol, make me feel fabulous.
Sending you love 💜
20th May 2023 4:13am
Yeah, good use of metaphor to describe the direction of emotion. It gets more meaningful and detailed, to be related to, as the reader reads on. You can really put into perspective some incredibly synonymous words and invocation. I hope you will start writing longer poems!
20th May 2023 11:12am
😊 I do need to write some longer poems.
Thank you for your opinion. It truly means a lot to me.
Oh I did write something alot longer, and I'm very proud of it. It's called The Sentence. I posted it before I knew you. I would love your opinion.
Thank you for your opinion. It truly means a lot to me.
Oh I did write something alot longer, and I'm very proud of it. It's called The Sentence. I posted it before I knew you. I would love your opinion.
