Sibilate

Excellent... crisp... rich in sibilance... well done db...

Aww. Thanks so much. Your comments really makes me smile. 😊

Debbie, this is beautiful in so many wonderful ways.  (Nature is very inspiring).  
I like how the wind moves through the leaves, simply creating beautiful melody.  

Your thoughts bring a smile.  😊

 

Nature is my greatest inspiration. There was a gorgeous, voluptuous breeze here today. I always have thought of trees as whispering ancient wisdom.
Thank you for your nice comments. 💜

If the world could be like nature the soft winds of Autumn would forever blow. Good poem.

Thanks so much!

Your use of alliteration really makes your pieces special. There's a little ... lift ... to them.

Great stuff, D-bear

Thank you so much Betty.
I think you are a fantastic writer so your comments on little old me, lol, make me feel fabulous.
Sending you love 💜

Yeah, good use of metaphor to describe the direction of emotion.  It gets more meaningful and detailed, to be related to, as the reader reads on.  You can really put into perspective some incredibly synonymous words and invocation.  I hope you will start writing longer poems!

😊 I do need to write some longer poems.

Thank you for your opinion. It truly means a lot to me.

Oh I did write something alot longer, and I'm very proud of it. It's called The Sentence. I posted it before I knew you. I would love your opinion.