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Potentially Pretentious Proverbious Paintings of People (1 & 2)
1.
Dismay sits like a lump at the bottom of my ballsack.
The knowing that reality shines a bright glare at a heavy head.
The rare and rational mind can understand the peace that we all need, but sadly the rest has no comprehension of its basic needs
and therefore it remains perpetually fucked.
2.
I imagine their nonsense mouths
running wildly over a silence
that was killed at birth...
I imagine them all too vividly.
That's what kills the soul
The imagination.
Dismay sits like a lump at the bottom of my ballsack.
The knowing that reality shines a bright glare at a heavy head.
The rare and rational mind can understand the peace that we all need, but sadly the rest has no comprehension of its basic needs
and therefore it remains perpetually fucked.
2.
I imagine their nonsense mouths
running wildly over a silence
that was killed at birth...
I imagine them all too vividly.
That's what kills the soul
The imagination.
Published 14th Apr 2012
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14th Apr 2012 8:48pm
obvious and significant change of structure for you. i like all of it. personal, properly proportioned, ponderable. [:
30th Mar 2013 10:32pm
I really liked this!! A style very unique to my own. You shold check minebout when given the chance!! An honest critique from a like minded person, would be spectacular!
