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Lots of things suck  
Long nails and heat  
Sticky honey on your fingertips  
Flowers dying  
The wind blowing so hard  
You can barely breathe  
Life in general  
Life can suck  
It seems sweet  
But then takes all your loved ones away  
Leaves you in the dust  
Not once looking back  
Maybe I'm being emotional  
But I have reasons to feel  
And I feel ruthless  
And horrified  
And exhausted  
Tell me one more time  
I'm being dramatic  
And I will snap  
I will fight  
And hit  
And bleed  
Until you can feel, hear, see, taste  
The pain and anger  
Feel it deep in your bones  
Then we'll see whose being dramatic
Written by moony_
Published | Edited 31st Dec 2024
Author's Note
People leave all the time, and I couldn't take it anymore. So I screamed this poem in my car till my lungs burned and my eyes were swollen and red.

(My first entry ever!!)
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