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lake + moon + sky
a moon
with tired eyes
carrying the
burden of love
don't you think
a mind won't stop?
It's not the love
that's comforting
it's a broken heart
that’s attracting
but you will
never know that
the sky won't
kiss the horizon
on the edge of a lake
as the moon gathers
the pieces of a flower
whispering secretly
and the sky will wait
with the stars
Published 12th May 2023
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12th May 2023 6:53pm
Your words give my own reverberating unrequited love a bit of comfort and some wistful solace....
Love that last line... it really echoes, Vick.
Thank you for sharing this moving and beautifully crafted poem with us.
🌹💙
B
Love that last line... it really echoes, Vick.
Thank you for sharing this moving and beautifully crafted poem with us.
🌹💙
B
13th May 2023 8:20am
Thank you, B.
It was an emotional ride for me. I enjoy putting myself into being broken. Kinda mixed with all my past love stories.
It was an emotional ride for me. I enjoy putting myself into being broken. Kinda mixed with all my past love stories.
13th May 2023 2:19am
Its great to see you old friend! This is powerful. love to you, dear. <3
13th May 2023 8:21am
13th May 2023 3:58pm
Loving the metaphors within this poignant spill
thank You for entering into my comp
thank You for entering into my comp
13th May 2023 10:09pm
Thank you, Tallen...
It was just after a day I saw your comp, and I felt it'd fit right.
:)
It was just after a day I saw your comp, and I felt it'd fit right.
:)
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