Boneless

Nice sensual write... flowing

Thanks so much. Stepped away from heavier thoughts for a moment.
Have a great day 🌻

Hi Deliabear,
How's Ru?

I agree with LiLD.
Nice sensual piece.

Take care.
X

Hi, I'm ok despite some painful things I'm going through.
Thought I would fall into fantasy.

Have a beautiful day.

I'm sorry 2 hear that Deliabear.

Im sure,with time,love and support.
Youll get through these things.

Glad 2 see U here.

Take care.
X

Thank you, you are very kind. 😊

this heated things up real quick delia

😊 that was my goal, lol.

Thanks always for reading and for your friendship.

Loved this, hope you feel better Luv💜💜💜

Aww. Thanks so much.
You are so kind.

Have a lovely evening 🌻

Hello there

There’s some really lovely sensuality in this. There’s a lot of tenderness that flows really well through the piece and I’m so glad that it’s labelled as fantasy - it does indeed feel very dream like.  

 If I could say one thing, I’d say maybe consider removing thigh’s in the last line as it feels a little superfluous. Quivering canyon is just a little more ambiguous, and yet still works as an image. That’s only my thoughts on reading it, of course you don’t even have to consider it :)

Thank you for sharing

-M

Thank you for your lovely comments. I took into consideration what you said and think I will remove the word thigh's. I think you are right and I truly appreciate your honest critique. That is how we grow as writers.  
 
Have a magical night ✨  
 
Just changed it and I like the way it sounds better 😊

"passion infects with magic poison."
That's certainly one way to describe an intimate moment.  
This is very playful and sensual.

Boneless and twisting, all night long.
Very exciting, indeed.  

My best to you, Debbie.  🌸

Hi! Thanks for checking my poem out. I thought I'd step away from reality and create a fantasy. I appreciate your comments, thanks so much.  
Have a wonderful day 🌺

Believe it or not, I came up with " boneless" watching this Netflix series on a ballet company. The beauty of the way they move, is as if they were boneless.