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Re. Path
7th May 2023 6:39pm
Gets the imagination thinking what it was that proved its existence. Whether the touching was by a lover or by oneself in the adolescent days of getting to know one's body.
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7th May 2023 6:49pm
The touch made by the lover is always special rather amazing and often the same path changes its direction...well thanks for commenting!
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7th May 2023 8:16pm
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8th May 2023 5:21am
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Re: Re. Path
8th May 2023 5:26am
yaaa n sometimes we ourselves make the path pleasant and frigid.. well thanks cath for your nice comment!
Re. Path
8th May 2023 4:05am
You touching your hot sexy body and has lead you to pure bliss. Keep on writing you smart beautiful sexy lady.
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8th May 2023 5:28am
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8th May 2023 6:03am
thank you but why this comment? as i think you are visiting me for the very first time.. well i hope you liked my stuff. thanks once again.
Re. Path
8th May 2023 7:17am
Weirdo alarm up above!
It's a beautiful, deep write, took it in and yes, sometimes the touch of another helps us to open our own hearts up to ourselves as well. As said, deep stuff here, very nicely done. The "path" can help us to see other "paths" in ourselves that we may have let become grown over. Nice work :) Enjoyed.
It's a beautiful, deep write, took it in and yes, sometimes the touch of another helps us to open our own hearts up to ourselves as well. As said, deep stuff here, very nicely done. The "path" can help us to see other "paths" in ourselves that we may have let become grown over. Nice work :) Enjoyed.
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8th May 2023 7:36am
Re. Path
10th May 2023 9:21pm
"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." - Ralph Waldo Emerson
The touch caused you to discover another avenue you were unaware of. Although short, your poem contains an abundance of meaning.
The touch caused you to discover another avenue you were unaware of. Although short, your poem contains an abundance of meaning.
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Re: Re. Path
11th May 2023 2:06am
Thank you so much for reading and commenting on me. Well I liked your response.
Ralph Waldo Emerson is awesome here!!
Ralph Waldo Emerson is awesome here!!