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Ardency

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Ardency


I believe that love,
divine love but without
deism, deities…..deis
one-sidedness sits
is
unselfish
motivated to be
proactive
reactive
active

and passive

However, inactive love
becomes stagnant
over time
creating consternation
and angst far deeper
within than one, anyone
might imagine possible

If caught in the mire
of unrequited quiet
how long can one remain
inert before aching hurt
consumes
every waking hour?

I posit
sacrificial love
is
positive
negative
animate
anemic

ah, just throw me under the bus!
OK, maybe not this type of
sacrifice, eh?




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Written by Tallen (earth_empath)
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