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Song
I heard today some notes
that shaped the ending of my Oxford days
and wove themselves
within the memory of my last love.
And present time was banished for a while
as I was swept up in a wave
of thoughts and images
of a gilded Autumn long since past
when I was held amazed,
tongue-tied, heart flared,
by Gilly's gaze and Gilly's grace.
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Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 8:04pm
Dear Baldwin,
You wait for me to write. Then, you take my subject and write about it. Where are your original ideas? Are you waiting for me to give you your subjects. Nearly all your writings depend on imitating J.Z.
You wait for me to write. Then, you take my subject and write about it. Where are your original ideas? Are you waiting for me to give you your subjects. Nearly all your writings depend on imitating J.Z.
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Re: Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 8:28pm
Re: Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 10:13pm
To write about the subjects you write about is NOT imitating you.
If I were to imitate you, my submissions would be full of bad punctuation, solecisms, grammar gaffes, limited and repetitive vocabulary, incoherencies, inversions, and forced rhyme, and be imageless, all-tell no-show compositions.
If I were to imitate you, my submissions would be full of bad punctuation, solecisms, grammar gaffes, limited and repetitive vocabulary, incoherencies, inversions, and forced rhyme, and be imageless, all-tell no-show compositions.
Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 9:02pm
I never tell a lie, Baldwin. Be truthful with yourself. Honesty is the best policy.
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Re: Re. Song
You lied about writing "mirth" . in your WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE? And you've never backed up your false claim that most of what I submit here is inspired by your submissions. And then you said that ALL the "poets" here are skilled in grammar. And you've put words I did not say in my mouth so you could score some points against me.
Here's the list of all of my submissions to DUP. Please point out which ones have been "inspired" by things you have written Or at least say precisely how many of them have been (i.e., give the precise number)..
(cue the crickets or the excuses not to do what a person who makes claims is responsible for doing when the claim is challenged.)
Can I trust my dear life to a re-occurrence of what happened to me in the past?
10th Month 2 likes
A Challenge to J-Z 1 like
A Challenge to J-Z -- and anyone else here who might find it fun to imitate Byron, Yeats, et. al. 1 reading list 1 like
A Ditty for Pharaoh 1 like
A Ditty on The Wages of Cheating 2 likes
A Kind of Sonnent 1 like
A Kind of Sonnet 1 like
A memory from long ago of Lee
A memory of GF 1 reading list 2 likes
A Pilgrim to the Trove of You 1 reading list 1 like
A poem for you 2 likes
A Renewed Challenge to J-Z 2 likes
A Riff on Catullus 1 reading list 3 likes
A Steven-esque
A summoning 1 like
absence 2 likes
Absent Friends 1 like
Absolution 1 like
Abused 1 reading list 1 like
Adam 2 likes
After the Annunciation
After Thomas Hardy's Oxen 2 likes
After Thomas Wyatt 1 reading list 1 like
afterlife? 1 like
Aftermath 1 reading list 3 likes
age
Age 1 like
Aging 1 like
Ah Gabriel 1 reading list 1 like
Ah you! 2 likes
All This to Have 1 reading list 2 likes
An Alexandrine Challenge
An Emulation of Thomas Wyatt's "And Leave Not Yet" 2 likes
An Emulation of Ovid
An Etheree 1 reading list 1 like
An Etheree on September 2 likes
An Inner Monologue
Angel
Angels' Song 1 like
Annunciation 1 like
Another about Gilly
Another Ditty 1 like
Another for Anne-C
another kiss 1 like
another on J-Z
approaching another birthday 1 like
As He Lay Dying 1 reading list 1 like
As I decorate my Christmas tree
As You Slept 3 likes
Ash Wednesday 1 like
Ash Wednesday 2 2 likes
At First Sight
At Glastonbury
At Night 3 likes
Augustine's Mistake 1 like
Autumn Emptiness 1 like
Autumn in Sherwood
awe 1 like
Ballerina 1 reading list 1 like
Be Gone!
Because of you 1 reading list 2 likes
Before 1 like
Belly Dancer
Bring me at this time of year, 1 reading list 2 likes
Calvary 1 reading list 2 likes
Cathedrals
Chastity
Christmas Tide
Circe 2 likes
Come 1 like
Come Dance With Me 1 like
Concepts without Percepts
Culprit Moon 1 like
Damn you, Woman 1 like
Day by Day 1 like
Derbyed Men
Desire 2 reading lists 4 likes
distance
Dity
Do Not Come With Me 1 like
Does death deprive? 1 reading list 1 like
Does God Care for Ghosts?
Dreams 1 like
Dreams 1 reading list 1 like
Dreams 1 like
Ekphrasis
Eliot 2 likes
Esker's Crest 1 reading list 3 likes
explorer 1 like
eyes 1 like
Farmer and his gun
Fire eyes
Fog 1 reading list 1 like
For Anne-C
For J-Z 1 reading list 1 like
For Robert Herrick 1 like
For Summer 3 likes
Gaining the World 1 like
Giotto's Angel 2 reading lists 2 likes
Give Me Now your Kiss 1 like
Gladiators 2 likes
Gloria 1 like
God
God and suffering
God Help Me Now 1 like
God is not Good: Bad Theology
God's Loaves
Golgatha
Golgatha 3 likes
Golgotha
Grey Wing 1 reading list 4 likes
Growing Old
Ha Satan 1 like
Haiku on one of my cats 1 like
Healing 1 reading list 2 likes
her crotch 1 like
Her Hands
Her laugh 2 likes
Here 2 likes
Here's What Comes from Remembering the Past
Hey Joseph-Z 1 like
him? 1 like
His Cold Fish (for J-Z who won't answer the question of whether he's been desired by women) 2 likes
How Can I Make you Believe? 2 likes
How I Wish It Were So 1 reading list 2 likes
How Many Times?
How should I Pray? 3 likes
How will you know 1 reading list 3 likes
How Will You Know? 1 like
I am religious 3 likes
I am religious (revised) 2 reading lists 3 likes
I Cannot Understand This Thing Called Soul
I could not be sad?
I Dreamed a Dream 1 like
I know there were no angels then 1 like
I Often Sit for Hours 1 reading list 1 like
I remember 1 reading list 3 likes
I require my woman be ...
I Shall Not Share 1 reading list 2 likes
I Shall Place My Palms 2 likes
I shall pretend 1 reading list 5 likes
I want your mouth 1 reading list 3 likes
I Will Kiss You With My Voice
I wonder 1 reading list 3 likes
I Wonder If 1 like
I'll Not be Obedient to Life 1 reading list 1 like
If I could be there 3 reading lists 4 likes
If I should craft new lullabies for you 1 reading list 1 like
If I should craft some lullabies for you 2 reading lists 2 likes
If You Wish It So
In Emulation of Ovid
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In Want of Words 1 like
Incarnation 1 like
Indecency 1 like
Indolence 1 like
Irony 1 like
It's Early Morning Now 3 likes
J-Z and Eroticism
J-Z and his "If"
jealous of his "poetry" 1 like
Jealousy 1 like
Jesus Cannot Take my Loneliness Away 1 like
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Joseph's criterion for what makes a poem "great"
Joseph's Dilemma 1 like
Joseph's Response 2 likes
kiss 2 likes
Kiss 2 likes
Kiss Me Now 2 likes
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Laura
Lazarus 1 like
Liar?
Lies 1 like
light 1 reading list 2 likes
lines 1 like
little bastard 1 like
Loneliness is a Fish 1 like
Longing 2 reading lists 5 likes
Magi 1 reading list 1 like
Manna from heaven
Mary 1 like
Mazmer 1 like
Memorial Day 1 like
Memorial Day
Memories of Oxford Things
Mitigation
Mortality
Mother Mary 1 like
Moths to Flame 1 reading list 2 likes
My heart 1 like
My Heart and Song 1 like
My hope for J-Z
My new cat 1 reading list 1 like
My pissed off Muse 4 likes
My Ram 1 like
My Skin is Taught 1 reading list 1 like
Nativity
night 2 likes
No Ambiguity 1 reading list 1 like
No Jewels 2 likes
Nostalgia 1 like
Not Soon Enough
not voiced
November's Trees 1 like
Odysseus the Liar 1 reading list 2 likes
Oedipus at Thebes
Old Men and the Sea
Old Simeon 1 like
On J-Z's "From Hands to Hands"
On Rilke's New Year's Wish 1 like
On Yoolis Night
One God?
Only Jesus? 1 like
pale moon 1 like
Pan 1 reading list 2 likes
Parts and Wholes 1 like
Pity Leaves Me Wounded 1 like
poetical idea 2 likes
Poetry as Prosaic Ideas
Pope's Complaint
Quit Telling Me that Heaven Is My Home 1 like
Raising People from the Dead
Ravages
Regret 5 likes
remember, body
Restraint 2 likes
Resurrection
Retort
Romulus
September Now 2 likes
Sheryl 1 like
Should We Love What the Braggart Writes 2 likes
Signs of God 1 like
Sin? 5 likes
So many miles 1 reading list 3 likes
Some (would-be) poets do believe ... 1 like
Some naive writers think 1 like
Song 1 reading list 4 likes
Song
Speaking to Clouds 1 like
Stage Fright
stages 2 likes
Subservience?
Sunrise Disturbed 1 reading list 3 likes
surprised 1 reading list 3 likes
Talentless 1 like
Tales of Camelot 1 like
Teach me Things
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The Arrogance and Stupidity of Patriarchy 1 like
The Bene Elohim at Christmas 1 like
The Claim 1 like
The Cygnet 1 like
The Damning Present 1 like
The fallacy known as poisoning the well
The Glisten Gray 1 like
The Home of Words
The Intent of Mary's Words to Me 1 reading list 2 likes
the Moment Afterwards 1 reading list 2 likes
the narcissist J-Z!
The Necessity of Rhyme 1 like
the power 2 likes
the power of the vagina 1 reading list 1 like
The Purpose of Prayer 1 reading list 1 like
The Road to Camelot 1 like
The Source of Sin
The Sway of J-Z's Ego 2 reading lists 2 likes
The Traditions of the Best English Poets
The Usefulness of Attachment to Jesus 1 reading list 1 like
the wages of age
There Have Been Times
There is a Saxon Church
There is Within Your Eyes 1 reading list 3 likes
These are the rough beginnings of my latter days 1 reading list 1 like
This Body 1 reading list 2 likes
Through a Glass Brightly 1 reading list 2 likes
Time of sexual purity 1 like
Time the Devourer 1 like
Tintagel 1 reading list 1 like
To Follow You 1 like
Touch 2 likes
Towards Cadbury 1 reading list 3 likes
truth 1 like
unremembered 1 like
veni, veni 1 reading list 1 like
want 1 reading list 2 likes
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Watching
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We Toured the Autumned Cotswold Lanes 1 like
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What I'd give 2 likes
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What Shall I Do? 1 reading list 1 like
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What was his boon? 1 reading list 1 like
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With apologies to Anacreon
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Within Your Eyes 1 reading list 1 like
worship 1 reading list 2 likes
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Yesterday
You asked 1 reading list 2 likes
you away 2 likes
You Did not Know It Then 2 likes
You Ought to Know 1 reading list 3 likes
You Thief! 1 like
your desire 1 reading list 1 like
Your evaluation, please 1 like
Your Eyes 1 reading list 1 like
Your Fingers 2 likes
Your Master 1 reading list 2 likes
Your Name 2 reading lists 2 likes
Your Searching Touch 3 likes
Your Touch 2 reading lists 2 likes
Your Words 1 reading list 2 likes
Here's the list of all of my submissions to DUP. Please point out which ones have been "inspired" by things you have written Or at least say precisely how many of them have been (i.e., give the precise number)..
(cue the crickets or the excuses not to do what a person who makes claims is responsible for doing when the claim is challenged.)
Can I trust my dear life to a re-occurrence of what happened to me in the past?
10th Month 2 likes
A Challenge to J-Z 1 like
A Challenge to J-Z -- and anyone else here who might find it fun to imitate Byron, Yeats, et. al. 1 reading list 1 like
A Ditty for Pharaoh 1 like
A Ditty on The Wages of Cheating 2 likes
A Kind of Sonnent 1 like
A Kind of Sonnet 1 like
A memory from long ago of Lee
A memory of GF 1 reading list 2 likes
A Pilgrim to the Trove of You 1 reading list 1 like
A poem for you 2 likes
A Renewed Challenge to J-Z 2 likes
A Riff on Catullus 1 reading list 3 likes
A Steven-esque
A summoning 1 like
absence 2 likes
Absent Friends 1 like
Absolution 1 like
Abused 1 reading list 1 like
Adam 2 likes
After the Annunciation
After Thomas Hardy's Oxen 2 likes
After Thomas Wyatt 1 reading list 1 like
afterlife? 1 like
Aftermath 1 reading list 3 likes
age
Age 1 like
Aging 1 like
Ah Gabriel 1 reading list 1 like
Ah you! 2 likes
All This to Have 1 reading list 2 likes
An Alexandrine Challenge
An Emulation of Thomas Wyatt's "And Leave Not Yet" 2 likes
An Emulation of Ovid
An Etheree 1 reading list 1 like
An Etheree on September 2 likes
An Inner Monologue
Angel
Angels' Song 1 like
Annunciation 1 like
Another about Gilly
Another Ditty 1 like
Another for Anne-C
another kiss 1 like
another on J-Z
approaching another birthday 1 like
As He Lay Dying 1 reading list 1 like
As I decorate my Christmas tree
As You Slept 3 likes
Ash Wednesday 1 like
Ash Wednesday 2 2 likes
At First Sight
At Glastonbury
At Night 3 likes
Augustine's Mistake 1 like
Autumn Emptiness 1 like
Autumn in Sherwood
awe 1 like
Ballerina 1 reading list 1 like
Be Gone!
Because of you 1 reading list 2 likes
Before 1 like
Belly Dancer
Bring me at this time of year, 1 reading list 2 likes
Calvary 1 reading list 2 likes
Cathedrals
Chastity
Christmas Tide
Circe 2 likes
Come 1 like
Come Dance With Me 1 like
Concepts without Percepts
Culprit Moon 1 like
Damn you, Woman 1 like
Day by Day 1 like
Derbyed Men
Desire 2 reading lists 4 likes
distance
Dity
Do Not Come With Me 1 like
Does death deprive? 1 reading list 1 like
Does God Care for Ghosts?
Dreams 1 like
Dreams 1 reading list 1 like
Dreams 1 like
Ekphrasis
Eliot 2 likes
Esker's Crest 1 reading list 3 likes
explorer 1 like
eyes 1 like
Farmer and his gun
Fire eyes
Fog 1 reading list 1 like
For Anne-C
For J-Z 1 reading list 1 like
For Robert Herrick 1 like
For Summer 3 likes
Gaining the World 1 like
Giotto's Angel 2 reading lists 2 likes
Give Me Now your Kiss 1 like
Gladiators 2 likes
Gloria 1 like
God
God and suffering
God Help Me Now 1 like
God is not Good: Bad Theology
God's Loaves
Golgatha
Golgatha 3 likes
Golgotha
Grey Wing 1 reading list 4 likes
Growing Old
Ha Satan 1 like
Haiku on one of my cats 1 like
Healing 1 reading list 2 likes
her crotch 1 like
Her Hands
Her laugh 2 likes
Here 2 likes
Here's What Comes from Remembering the Past
Hey Joseph-Z 1 like
him? 1 like
His Cold Fish (for J-Z who won't answer the question of whether he's been desired by women) 2 likes
How Can I Make you Believe? 2 likes
How I Wish It Were So 1 reading list 2 likes
How Many Times?
How should I Pray? 3 likes
How will you know 1 reading list 3 likes
How Will You Know? 1 like
I am religious 3 likes
I am religious (revised) 2 reading lists 3 likes
I Cannot Understand This Thing Called Soul
I could not be sad?
I Dreamed a Dream 1 like
I know there were no angels then 1 like
I Often Sit for Hours 1 reading list 1 like
I remember 1 reading list 3 likes
I require my woman be ...
I Shall Not Share 1 reading list 2 likes
I Shall Place My Palms 2 likes
I shall pretend 1 reading list 5 likes
I want your mouth 1 reading list 3 likes
I Will Kiss You With My Voice
I wonder 1 reading list 3 likes
I Wonder If 1 like
I'll Not be Obedient to Life 1 reading list 1 like
If I could be there 3 reading lists 4 likes
If I should craft new lullabies for you 1 reading list 1 like
If I should craft some lullabies for you 2 reading lists 2 likes
If You Wish It So
In Emulation of Ovid
In the Brightest of My Rooms 1 like
In Want of Words 1 like
Incarnation 1 like
Indecency 1 like
Indolence 1 like
Irony 1 like
It's Early Morning Now 3 likes
J-Z and Eroticism
J-Z and his "If"
jealous of his "poetry" 1 like
Jealousy 1 like
Jesus Cannot Take my Loneliness Away 1 like
Jesus' love
Joseph's claims
Joseph's criterion for what makes a poem "great"
Joseph's Dilemma 1 like
Joseph's Response 2 likes
kiss 2 likes
Kiss 2 likes
Kiss Me Now 2 likes
La Belle Dame sans Merci
Laura
Lazarus 1 like
Liar?
Lies 1 like
light 1 reading list 2 likes
lines 1 like
little bastard 1 like
Loneliness is a Fish 1 like
Longing 2 reading lists 5 likes
Magi 1 reading list 1 like
Manna from heaven
Mary 1 like
Mazmer 1 like
Memorial Day 1 like
Memorial Day
Memories of Oxford Things
Mitigation
Mortality
Mother Mary 1 like
Moths to Flame 1 reading list 2 likes
My heart 1 like
My Heart and Song 1 like
My hope for J-Z
My new cat 1 reading list 1 like
My pissed off Muse 4 likes
My Ram 1 like
My Skin is Taught 1 reading list 1 like
Nativity
night 2 likes
No Ambiguity 1 reading list 1 like
No Jewels 2 likes
Nostalgia 1 like
Not Soon Enough
not voiced
November's Trees 1 like
Odysseus the Liar 1 reading list 2 likes
Oedipus at Thebes
Old Men and the Sea
Old Simeon 1 like
On J-Z's "From Hands to Hands"
On Rilke's New Year's Wish 1 like
On Yoolis Night
One God?
Only Jesus? 1 like
pale moon 1 like
Pan 1 reading list 2 likes
Parts and Wholes 1 like
Pity Leaves Me Wounded 1 like
poetical idea 2 likes
Poetry as Prosaic Ideas
Pope's Complaint
Quit Telling Me that Heaven Is My Home 1 like
Raising People from the Dead
Ravages
Regret 5 likes
remember, body
Restraint 2 likes
Resurrection
Retort
Romulus
September Now 2 likes
Sheryl 1 like
Should We Love What the Braggart Writes 2 likes
Signs of God 1 like
Sin? 5 likes
So many miles 1 reading list 3 likes
Some (would-be) poets do believe ... 1 like
Some naive writers think 1 like
Song 1 reading list 4 likes
Song
Speaking to Clouds 1 like
Stage Fright
stages 2 likes
Subservience?
Sunrise Disturbed 1 reading list 3 likes
surprised 1 reading list 3 likes
Talentless 1 like
Tales of Camelot 1 like
Teach me Things
That isn't proof 1 reading list 2 likes
The Arrogance and Stupidity of Patriarchy 1 like
The Bene Elohim at Christmas 1 like
The Claim 1 like
The Cygnet 1 like
The Damning Present 1 like
The fallacy known as poisoning the well
The Glisten Gray 1 like
The Home of Words
The Intent of Mary's Words to Me 1 reading list 2 likes
the Moment Afterwards 1 reading list 2 likes
the narcissist J-Z!
The Necessity of Rhyme 1 like
the power 2 likes
the power of the vagina 1 reading list 1 like
The Purpose of Prayer 1 reading list 1 like
The Road to Camelot 1 like
The Source of Sin
The Sway of J-Z's Ego 2 reading lists 2 likes
The Traditions of the Best English Poets
The Usefulness of Attachment to Jesus 1 reading list 1 like
the wages of age
There Have Been Times
There is a Saxon Church
There is Within Your Eyes 1 reading list 3 likes
These are the rough beginnings of my latter days 1 reading list 1 like
This Body 1 reading list 2 likes
Through a Glass Brightly 1 reading list 2 likes
Time of sexual purity 1 like
Time the Devourer 1 like
Tintagel 1 reading list 1 like
To Follow You 1 like
Touch 2 likes
Towards Cadbury 1 reading list 3 likes
truth 1 like
unremembered 1 like
veni, veni 1 reading list 1 like
want 1 reading list 2 likes
Was Jesus Uniquely "Great"?
Wasting Time Writing Complaining "Poetry" 1 like
Watching
We Stood Outside
We Toured the Autumned Cotswold Lanes 1 like
What Did the Angel Proclaim?
What I didn't do
What I Want 2 likes
What I'd give 2 likes
What Is It That You Want? 1 reading list 1 like
What Links Heaven to the Earth?
What Shall I Do? 1 reading list 1 like
what to pray 2 likes
What was his boon? 1 reading list 1 like
What Would Be Done?
Where are we headed to?
White Christmas?
Whose Bodies
Why Joseph Doesn't Write Arthurania
Why Remorse? 1 like
Will I sigh? 3 likes
Will One Be Happy In A Ghostly Realm?
With apologies to Anacreon
Within Our Nested Dark 1 reading list 3 likes
Within Your Eyes 1 reading list 1 like
worship 1 reading list 2 likes
Wounds at Agincourt
Wreathing 1 like
Wrinkles 2 likes
Yeas Ago 1 like
Yes, I Have an Answer 1 reading list 1 like
Yesterday
You asked 1 reading list 2 likes
you away 2 likes
You Did not Know It Then 2 likes
You Ought to Know 1 reading list 3 likes
You Thief! 1 like
your desire 1 reading list 1 like
Your evaluation, please 1 like
Your Eyes 1 reading list 1 like
Your Fingers 2 likes
Your Master 1 reading list 2 likes
Your Name 2 reading lists 2 likes
Your Searching Touch 3 likes
Your Touch 2 reading lists 2 likes
Your Words 1 reading list 2 likes
Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 10:16pm
I am not interested to an extent to check your writings. You know which are taken from J.Z., so you check them and tell me. It seems to me you have plenty of time and are puzzled how to spend it.
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Re: Re. Song
Your claim. Your responsibility to back it up. And of course, the reason that you are providing this flimsy excuse (it would take too much time) for not doing so is that you know that if you did as I asked, you'd be shown to be the liar you are.
Cue the ad hominems.
Cue the ad hominems.
Re. Song
25th Apr 2023 10:54pm
Stop saying LIAR. I don't know why you are accustomed to saying this word.
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Re: Re. Song
Stop lying -- especially about the fact that you haven't lied -- and I will.
And I am not "accustomed" to saying it. I use it when it is appropriate.
And I am not "accustomed" to saying it. I use it when it is appropriate.
Re. Song
26th Apr 2023 8:24am
And l will= you mean you will stop lying. I never lie, Baldwin. It's a sin to lie.
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Re: Re. Song
26th Apr 2023 1:24pm
"And l will= you mean you will stop lying."
No. I meant I will stop using the word "liar" to describe you
"I never lie, Baldwin. It's a sin to lie."
You are lying now. Did you not deny that you used the word "mirth" in your WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE? when you did?
Have you not lied when you claimed (more than once) that most, if not all, of my submissions are inspired by things you've written?
No. I meant I will stop using the word "liar" to describe you
"I never lie, Baldwin. It's a sin to lie."
You are lying now. Did you not deny that you used the word "mirth" in your WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE? when you did?
Have you not lied when you claimed (more than once) that most, if not all, of my submissions are inspired by things you've written?
Re. Song
26th Apr 2023 2:00pm
Re: Re. Song
So you didn't ever use the word "mirth" (twice) in your original posting of WHAT'S THE SECRET OF THE CHANGE? That is to say, this is not what appeared in your original posting to this thread?.
"They beheld in Christ the might
that could make their world so cheap
when compared with what He'd done
that submerged their hearts with mirth."
And are you saying that you did not edit your text to replace "mirth" with "bliss"?
Will you deny that you did indeed deny using the word "mirth" and that you were committing a lie when you denied you did.?
And will you deny that you have claimed without proof that most or all of my submissions have been inspired by yours even though you know that isn't the case?
Will you deny that you have claimed that I said things I did not say?
"They beheld in Christ the might
that could make their world so cheap
when compared with what He'd done
that submerged their hearts with mirth."
And are you saying that you did not edit your text to replace "mirth" with "bliss"?
Will you deny that you did indeed deny using the word "mirth" and that you were committing a lie when you denied you did.?
And will you deny that you have claimed without proof that most or all of my submissions have been inspired by yours even though you know that isn't the case?
Will you deny that you have claimed that I said things I did not say?