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Ten years
Ten years ago today
the photo said
and I look and wonder
what was in her head
Those three kids are all
adult sized now
forging their paths
and making her proud
Ten years ago
there was hardly a whisper
of dementia or death,
Crohn’s or cancer
Her faith was solid,
she was active and working
no burnout, career change
or mental health lurking
She looks confident--
I recall she was stressed
keeping up appearances
feeling repressed
She had a few shake-ups
a gradual awaking
now she’s finding her voice
and she’s finally done faking.
Author's Note
#22 of 30
The "memories" feature of facebook is one of the few things I still like about it. Shocking how much can change in ten years. In some ways I'm a whole different person.
The "memories" feature of facebook is one of the few things I still like about it. Shocking how much can change in ten years. In some ways I'm a whole different person.
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Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 4:46am
Wtf I hate the new RL bullshit.
I don't miss Facebook, personally. Lol. Some things needed to be let go for me.
But, I agree and understand how it's timeline can show you progress. And you ARE a different person, after ten years. I hope all for the better too.
Your writing tells us so. Keep doing this!
I don't miss Facebook, personally. Lol. Some things needed to be let go for me.
But, I agree and understand how it's timeline can show you progress. And you ARE a different person, after ten years. I hope all for the better too.
Your writing tells us so. Keep doing this!
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Re: Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 7:27pm
Sometimes I feel like I'm a different person every damn day! Anyway, I was a lot more on top of things then so in some ways I think I've declined. But I wasn't really writing and making music, so I'm not sure I'd want to go back...
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Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 12:38pm
You're a thinking chick RED.
Mucho respect for all your pitfalls and accomplishments so far.
As my father-in-law used to say wisely
"It's a good life if you don't weaken"
You're one of the good humans RED !!
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Mucho respect for all your pitfalls and accomplishments so far.
As my father-in-law used to say wisely
"It's a good life if you don't weaken"
You're one of the good humans RED !!
BIG RED LIKE
🤠❤💯
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Re: Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 7:24pm
Thanks, PS.
I don't know if I weakened or got stronger, or if I just finally decided I matter too.
Life is a constant learning curve, and sometimes it's just fucking exhausting!
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I don't know if I weakened or got stronger, or if I just finally decided I matter too.
Life is a constant learning curve, and sometimes it's just fucking exhausting!
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Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 4:31pm
Damn. I feel you, in strong resonances. It's something I often contemplate, time, journey, suffering, transformation
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Re: Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 7:29pm
I know suffering and transformation are necessary... it's a tiring journey though. All the worst things that have happened in my adult life have been since that picture. Crazy!
Thanks for the support.
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Thanks for the support.
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Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 6:46pm
Love this. The human condition never changes when one is at peace with their own emotions.
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Re: Re. Ten years
23rd Apr 2023 7:30pm
Gosh, at peace with my emotions is something I don't think I'll ever be. But if I was, I probably wouldn't be able to write poetry...
Thanks for stopping by.
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Re. Ten years
24th Apr 2023 8:35am
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Re. Ten years
22nd Jun 2023 6:37pm
I'm constantly floored by thought of "where did the time go?" whenever I see pictures, friends, even of my own kids. Time is relentless, but poetry (along with photographs) seems to be the only thing that can capture time.
Great work.
Great work.
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Re: Re. Ten years
23rd Jun 2023 00:27am
Many thanks. It can be hard not to feel old when faced with those photos. But I feel privileged to have lived so many lives in my life... if that makes any sense!
I appreciate your presence & kind support, Wally.
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I appreciate your presence & kind support, Wally.
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