Ball in chest

Hello Raconteur  

I think your comment is entirely accurate sir, we all break free eventually it just takes time to settle into it, thank you for your comment and your well wishes.

Kind Regards

-A

Hello Cathedral

Another accurate comment and i'm glad you saw that in this little piece, I feel it would be fair to say there is a responsibility to look out for mutuals who come across somebody who's been a bit predator in their behaviour and you know it firsthand, well one can at least try to fly the signal, thank you for your comment and your astute thoughts.

Kind Regards

-A

Dear N,

This is a powerful write. It’s message is so clear and experiencing both sides of a similar situation that ball in chest has spikes on it. May we all know freedom from this feeling someday soon. Difficult subject, excellent writing. H🌷

Hello Honoria


I'm charmed to see you here again, I appreciate you saw the power in this poem and the two sides that sadly come with the territory, it isn't a pleasant feeling in the slightest and nobody deserves the panic mode that takes over when simply trying to explain an incredibly bad experience, I definitely concur with you in hope that everybody becomes free from those emotions, thank you for your support and your tender words.

Kind Regards

-A  

Nice flow with this... like the crisp line breaks..

Hope she'll get the message before it is too late.

If I could, I would, RL the hell out of this.  Alas, my pockets are bare of RLs .  

Still, this is a critically good read for me to take in.  You're a true archer at poetry.  It's good having you here.  High quality like this is always appreciated by me.

Hello Styxian

You're too kind with your words sir, i'm aware it isn't incredibly poetic but rather a poem that had urgency in the moment and sometimes that takes priority over everything else, i'm humbled to hear this little piece is being held in high quality and is appreciated by you and i'm greatly thankful for that.

Kind Regards

-A

I've been reading a very long time.  When it comes to poetry, we all have our tastes, and also what we deem is done with a flair and skill set.  You have that for sure.  
Poetry is a build, a structure, yes?   But many times it's well built and yet boring.  Like math.

I want my brain to be electrocuted to some degree, when I read stuff.  Yours does that.

You write poetically.  Don't doubt.