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Chills, the Rise and the Fall
One Touch,
tenderly taking the time needed . .
Lips of a lullaby are simply aching to place (with gentleness)
a sweet caress
and then trace “Chills, the rise and the fall”
those tiny goosebumps of love
Satisfaction covers all, whispering a soft sigh (again and again)
. . having successfully succeeded
tenderly taking the time needed,
upon the calling of silky skin
One Touch,
allows lips to linger softly high, and then lightly low
. . to escape especially slow
creating an echo
tenderly taking the time needed,
to taste “Chills, the rise and the fall”
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Published 22nd Apr 2023
| Edited 24th Apr 2023
Author's Note
~ Something Sensual ~
Always craving such a touch
Always craving such a touch
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This is nicely erotic.. There's a need we all feel. Sharing it with someone else creates comfort and a sense of securety one craves all their days. Those chills are formed from excitement.
22nd Apr 2023 7:18pm
* Nicely erotic * Such a sweet thing to say, because I think so too. An intimate moment can be expressed in soft tones. I completely agree, we all need such a touch, one that leaves chills - a feeling of infinite pleasure.
Thank you, C.
Your thoughts are appreciated.
Sometimes the muse is surrounded by soft sensuality. 😊
Thank you, C.
Your thoughts are appreciated.
Sometimes the muse is surrounded by soft sensuality. 😊
22nd Apr 2023 6:24am
you disappears when you return
Dazzle us with your lustful ink
An interesting and erotic poem
Enjoy reading
peace and love
MP
Dazzle us with your lustful ink
An interesting and erotic poem
Enjoy reading
peace and love
MP
22nd Apr 2023 7:27pm
Soft smile. : )
I haven't disappeared, just taken a moment to live and laugh.
This is filled with playful passion and moments that tease the senses.
Thank you MP, for your lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List.
: ) Brandy
I haven't disappeared, just taken a moment to live and laugh.
This is filled with playful passion and moments that tease the senses.
Thank you MP, for your lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List.
: ) Brandy
22nd Apr 2023 12:28pm
oh, so nicely written,
the passion
the gentle touch, so sensual.
your words truly capture the progression and timing of this erotic interlude
thank you for sharing
the passion
the gentle touch, so sensual.
your words truly capture the progression and timing of this erotic interlude
thank you for sharing
22nd Apr 2023 7:35pm
A tender touch can do so much.
Oh, the anticipation as whispers caress the skin - -
chills arise and lips begin, the journey.
Your thoughts are appreciated.
Thank you, Mystic ! : )
Oh, the anticipation as whispers caress the skin - -
chills arise and lips begin, the journey.
Your thoughts are appreciated.
Thank you, Mystic ! : )
24th Apr 2023 00:41am
You take your time to pleasure her well. You got all time in the world. Make sure she receives orgasmic bliss. Keep on writing.
24th Apr 2023 2:06am
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8th May 2023 4:37am
A deliciously sensual exploration of the sensation of goosebumps elicited by touch. Loved immersing myself in your words here and luxuriating in the feelings and imagery that wrapped around me as I read. Loved every scintillating moment spent here in your universe.
John
John
9th May 2023 4:42am
There's something so sensual and exciting about a soft whisper along the skin, teases all the senses, again and again. You leave me in complete awe, saying you are swept away in my images and satisfaction, while diving into my universe.
I'm fluttering and blushing, all at the same time. ❤️
Thank you, John.
Oh, my ! I appreciate you adding this to your Reading List as well.
I'm fluttering and blushing, all at the same time. ❤️
Thank you, John.
Oh, my ! I appreciate you adding this to your Reading List as well.
22nd May 2023 1:38am
Dear, Brandy
How did I miss this one, it's beautiful. It almost brought a tear thinking of the oneness we share in thought about "tenderly taking the time needed." I love slow, tender love making...it's a profound experience.🥰
How did I miss this one, it's beautiful. It almost brought a tear thinking of the oneness we share in thought about "tenderly taking the time needed." I love slow, tender love making...it's a profound experience.🥰
22nd May 2023 3:18am
Hi, GW. Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. I'm in awe with you saying this almost brought a tear. That is how it should be, when making love. Soft, slow and tender. Taking the time needed, to feel every emotion. Embrace each moment.
I appreciate you adding this to your Reading List.
I'm breathless. ❤️
I appreciate you adding this to your Reading List.
I'm breathless. ❤️
29th May 2023 4:28pm
29th May 2023 6:16pm
Such a wonderful thing to say. A light touch creates the rise of fall, of soft breathing. Chills also linger. Thank you, Em. I appreciate your lovely comment.
29th May 2023 6:44pm
