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Thirty two
I feel you slowly
erasing from
every line
almost as
if you're living
half dead &
half alive,
all I wonder
about lately
is whether
or not you
half cried,
perhaps
my only sin
is knowing
my feet
carry
on.
Published 21st Apr 2023
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21st Apr 2023 3:47pm
28th Apr 2023 2:12am
Hello Tallen
I'm happy you felt the emotion in this write and no words had come across wasted or unworthy, thank you for reading and your kind comment.
Kind Regards
-A
I'm happy you felt the emotion in this write and no words had come across wasted or unworthy, thank you for reading and your kind comment.
Kind Regards
-A
Anonymous
21st Apr 2023 4:29pm
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21st Apr 2023 6:20pm
21st Apr 2023 7:57pm
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22nd Apr 2023 2:49pm
Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.
I started with this one, as I have to figure out your handwriting/thumbprint. Which takes some time in a language my mum didn’t teach me.
So far I am truly impressed by your storytelling and compact writing.
I can only thank you for sharing.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
I started with this one, as I have to figure out your handwriting/thumbprint. Which takes some time in a language my mum didn’t teach me.
So far I am truly impressed by your storytelling and compact writing.
I can only thank you for sharing.
Kind regards, Gus
22nd Apr 2023 4:53pm
I agree, terrific depth with impact through its brevity, a focused emotional presence.
