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You
You torment me day by day,
I can’t understand this connection
Sometimes I just write to me
Other times I write for you
And maybe my poems are weird
I just remind you every time,
That you are not indifferent to me
And I can always feel your words
But the main thing is about love,
I don’t know why you love me
But you will not deceive,
And therefore I trust you
You meet me in the ether
And there are those cherished times
When you and I are left alone,
And so that this goes on
I wrote to you a lot and I will write,
Perhaps I'll always write you
I can’t understand this connection
Sometimes I just write to me
Other times I write for you
And maybe my poems are weird
I just remind you every time,
That you are not indifferent to me
And I can always feel your words
But the main thing is about love,
I don’t know why you love me
But you will not deceive,
And therefore I trust you
You meet me in the ether
And there are those cherished times
When you and I are left alone,
And so that this goes on
I wrote to you a lot and I will write,
Perhaps I'll always write you
Author's Note
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Re. You
19th Apr 2023 9:12pm
Me 😂😂
This is great...the feelings come from many places that cause us to spill our souls
This is great...the feelings come from many places that cause us to spill our souls
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Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 9:25pm
Yeah you damnit! lol
So happy you understand my crazy writing Tim. ;) Oh yes! my feelings come from all over the place and when they spill out in words you never quite know what you are going to get I guess. :p X
So happy you understand my crazy writing Tim. ;) Oh yes! my feelings come from all over the place and when they spill out in words you never quite know what you are going to get I guess. :p X
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Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 9:27pm
Thanks Rac, I love that you stay and read. I really do want to brighten the place and make it more fun so I adore that you feel that! <3 That means a lot to me. And yes, that's about all any of us can hope to do I think. :) X
Re. You
19th Apr 2023 9:38pm
Sending hugs across the void from London. Great read hoping alls good as it can be beautiful
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 10:14pm
Thanks so much Ron, I definitely need the hugs. Things are very hard right now so I really appreciate the positive vibes, love and light so much... You are a very kind beautiful soul. And I really miss London, what an absolutely incredible city it is. :) X
Re. You
As archaic as the concept may be, it is the aether where glory resides,
and we mere mortals gaze transfixedly at the goddess therein!
and we mere mortals gaze transfixedly at the goddess therein!
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Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 10:17pm
I like archaic concepts. :) And so much resides in the aether, I am always lost and wondering around in there somewhere looking for God knows what. But us mere mortals are always searching for something or the next thing but gazing at the goddess within, now that sounds beautiful. ;) X
Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 10:19pm
You are so sweet to me Mary. Your comments never fail to make me smile. Thank you so much for reading and brightening my day. :) X
Re. You
19th Apr 2023 10:39pm
A wonderful and romantic piece
Enjoy reading the delicate verses
love and peace
MP
Enjoy reading the delicate verses
love and peace
MP
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Re: Re. You
19th Apr 2023 10:50pm
I am glad you could see the romantic aspects in this one and thought it was a wonderful piece. :) I can be very romantic and delicate and I am glad you enjoy that side of things. Lots of love and peace back at cha MP. ;) X
Re. You
This is an elegant and majestic write.
And the picture you chose reminds me of you. Thoughtful, wondrous and a thinking woman who sees and tells ....
The ether is a cosmic place. Many of us reside there to escape the noise and chaos of everyday life. There's charm and grace and explosive passion. Anyone lucky enough to meet you there will we well rewarded for a chance to hear your stories and make new ones worthy of your exquisite poetry.
This is RL Country
This is BIG
This I LIKE
And the picture you chose reminds me of you. Thoughtful, wondrous and a thinking woman who sees and tells ....
The ether is a cosmic place. Many of us reside there to escape the noise and chaos of everyday life. There's charm and grace and explosive passion. Anyone lucky enough to meet you there will we well rewarded for a chance to hear your stories and make new ones worthy of your exquisite poetry.
This is RL Country
This is BIG
This I LIKE
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Re: Re. You
Well I love Elegant and Majestic. ;)
Yes, I felt a connection to that picture for a number of reasons. Oooo that's so sweet... Thoughtful, wondrous, I love it. Definitely see and tell (sometimes).
The aether is endless and yes it can be a refuge to escape the noise and chaos of everyday life. I wish I was able to spend more time here this year but it's been hard. Tons of explosive passion but with charm and grace yes. ;) Wow, I mean damn you left me speechless. I think that's what you had in mind to shut me up. I so adore what you said! <3
Damnit there you go again. lol Thank you so much PS! X
Yes, I felt a connection to that picture for a number of reasons. Oooo that's so sweet... Thoughtful, wondrous, I love it. Definitely see and tell (sometimes).
The aether is endless and yes it can be a refuge to escape the noise and chaos of everyday life. I wish I was able to spend more time here this year but it's been hard. Tons of explosive passion but with charm and grace yes. ;) Wow, I mean damn you left me speechless. I think that's what you had in mind to shut me up. I so adore what you said! <3
Damnit there you go again. lol Thank you so much PS! X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 00:04am
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:32am
Hey Brenda, Awww... you are so sweet to me. 💖 I always love hearing from you. Sorry I haven't been around much, I know I have missed so much great writing and art. I hope you are having a wonderful year so far! Lots of love. X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:29am
I have felt our 'connection' at times for sure but all my fairytails are full of shit! Maroon 5, right? Lol. I know where I stand, don't worry. 😊
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:47am
Damnit Billy, you know fairy tales can be totally F*ked up... Read the real Grimm's fairy tales and you know what I am talking about. But they can still be lots of fun right? The Maroon 5 reference went over my head. I could make a blonde joke I guess but I am not going to start that. lol And that sounds kind of bad. Don't be like that. * kick * :p X
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:54am
Ok, The song is called "Payphone" by Maroon 5. It's a strange song cos 2 of its employees in the bank are escaping the bank that is being robbed lol. In the lyrics, the singer reflects on the fact that all of his romantic gestures make him want to vomit, lol. That's how I feel sometimes about myself, but not always. Sometimes I feel proud as a Peacock, lol.
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 3:19am
It's hard to attract women with vomit talk.
Try Boner talk and lots of cum speak.
Works for me ....
Try Boner talk and lots of cum speak.
Works for me ....
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:41pm
I like the song and video. Vomit... wow, that's some reaction. :p I prefer to see you show off your feathers... proud as a peacock. ;)
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:43pm
Haha... vomit talk makes me think of a long night drinking way too much. Ah yes! Boner talk is totally different... Who doesn't love a good boner. :p
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 2:00pm
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 2:18am
You can write all you want. I'm here to read and listen. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 1:47pm
Hopefully I will write some more soon. :) I love that you are here to read and listen Francisco, that's so sweet! It makes me so happy to know you are there and want me to keep writing. Thank you so much for the encouragement! X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 3:30am
Dear K,
I viewed this poem as a letter written to myself by myself. Reminding me I’m worthy alone or otherwise. It’s so reflective and understanding I couldn’t help feeling guided away to that ether and have a moment of wist. You've been missed and it’s wonderful to see you tonight! You haven’t lost a bit of your writing prowess during your hiatus! Lovely write. H🌷
I viewed this poem as a letter written to myself by myself. Reminding me I’m worthy alone or otherwise. It’s so reflective and understanding I couldn’t help feeling guided away to that ether and have a moment of wist. You've been missed and it’s wonderful to see you tonight! You haven’t lost a bit of your writing prowess during your hiatus! Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 2:41pm
That's a good way to view it. :) You are definitely worthy in every way. I have been doing a lot of reflecting recently and that can be difficult. But I still love to whisk you away to the ether with me for a moment of wist. :) Your kind words really mean so much to me. I don't know what to say but it's always so wonderful to see you too. You are so sweet to me and make me feel better so thank you so much. And I am so happy you thought it was lovely... X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 5:27am
Dearest, Kristina
I am definitely not indifferent to you😍 Lovely write, BD❣
I am definitely not indifferent to you😍 Lovely write, BD❣
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Re: Re. You
Hey there GW, it's always great to see you! I am so happy you are not indifferent, that's so sweet. ;) You know I am not either. I love that you found it a lovely write and those hearts in the eyes are so cute. :) Thank you! X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 5:46pm
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 6:46pm
Intimate and direct, that's me... ;) Really glad you loved it Daniel. It's always great to see you too. I hope things are going well and thank you so much for stopping by to see me and sharing your thoughts. X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 6:14pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 "you " is amazing 👏 ❤ great 👍 ❤ work 👌 Kristina love is the answer and you ❤ and I are the results to this answer as we all should remain on this path and not stray this is how we all can make brighter and better days!!! Excellent 👌 musing please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings always 🙏
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 6:49pm
Awww... thank you so much for saying I am amazing, that's so sweet of you Richy. Love is definitely the best answer and I know you have so much love in your heart. :) It's definitely a path that always makes things better. Oh yes! just musing around some in this one. I will keep on writing... Thank you so much for the peace and blessings!!! I love that. :) X
Re. You
20th Apr 2023 8:45pm
Beautiful 🌼
"But let there be spaces in your togetherness and let the winds of the heavens dance between you. Love one another but make not a bond of love: let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls." - Kahlil Gibran
"But let there be spaces in your togetherness and let the winds of the heavens dance between you. Love one another but make not a bond of love: let it rather be a moving sea between the shores of your souls." - Kahlil Gibran
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Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 9:08pm
Hey Aj, it's so great to see you and I love that you found it beautiful. That makes me really happy. Wow, what an incredible quote. I had never seen that one before... I will have to look up Khalil Gibran! Thanks so much for stopping in to see me and sharing that quote. :) X
Re: Re. You
20th Apr 2023 9:29pm
Re. You
21st Apr 2023 7:36pm
The way my mind works, once again a song comes to mind, "Your Song", by Elton John. Also a few gems by Joni Mitchell.
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Re: Re. You
21st Apr 2023 9:08pm
I love the way your mind works. What a beautiful and sweet song, I absolutely adore that so thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. Now I have to do some digging into Joni Mitchell to see which ones you were thinking of. ;) I always love it when you stop by Jazz, you have such an extensive knowledge of songs. It's always so interesting to see what you will associate. X
Re. You
21st Apr 2023 7:38pm
I can’t imagine the glow on that persons face when he/she recognized that this write was about him or her . You haven’t been around much. I know you have stuff going on but I can tell you with certainty, that this site is a hell of a lot better when you are writing and participating.
Keep bringing it Kx …
Keep bringing it Kx …
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Re: Re. You
21st Apr 2023 9:15pm
I am so happy you feel that way. I love putting a glow on someone's face! ;) This is rather personal and from the heart but I always write with passion. Yes, I haven't been around much which sucks. I definitely have stuff going on... That you think I make the site better means so much to me. Hopefully I will be able to participate more again in the future. There are so many wonderful people here and such wonderful writing. I know I am missing a lot. X
Re. You
I get two interpretations: (1) you and "me" reside in the busy space of your mind, or (2) a friend or loved one that has passed on.
There is a mutual respect and honesty between the two, and a comfort to have someone (even if in the ether) to confide in.
I like that the "two" of you help each other cope.
There is a mutual respect and honesty between the two, and a comfort to have someone (even if in the ether) to confide in.
I like that the "two" of you help each other cope.
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Re: Re. You
25th Apr 2023 2:43am
Ah yes, always in the busy space in my mind... but it's all busy in there... Could be either of those or both. And also a general appreciation of people here and this as an outlet during a very difficult time too. But there is more to it... There is a mutual respect, honesty, and comfort to have 'someone'. As usual you are always very perceptive DaVinci. Always so happy when "You" share your thoughts with me. ;) X
Re. You
10th Jun 2023 9:59pm
Totally relatable and honest. I know I’m a little late to the party but gathering from all the community here, we can see how much everyone enjoys your virtual company, your company it’s are always a welcomed sight.
Thank you for sharing Kristina. Hope you’re doing welll.
Thank you for sharing Kristina. Hope you’re doing welll.
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Re: Re. You
10th Jun 2023 11:17pm
Sometimes I can be too open and honest perhaps... :) You are never too late to the party Wally. I am so glad that some enjoy my virtual company and I adore it if you feel that way. You are always a welcomed sight for me... I always remember that you were my very first comment. I honestly did not expect much response when I posted for that Mother's day. Prior to that I had not planned to post.
I am doing as best as I can. Things with my Mom are really bad now. It took longer than expected but now things are deteriorating fast so it's really hard on me. But anyway, I am doing everything I can.
I am doing as best as I can. Things with my Mom are really bad now. It took longer than expected but now things are deteriorating fast so it's really hard on me. But anyway, I am doing everything I can.
Re. You
6th Aug 2023 8:53pm
This is so relatable to most of us here. Many times we end up focusing on someone who we just seem to click intimately with. It can seem precarious perhaps, yet the allure is no less a drug than what we initially consumed by choice. We are addicted soon!
As writers here, words are obviously our skin and bones, and to a point our souls. The heart is peeking, though. It wants to be involved badly, too. Yeah?
Your poem expresses well the acknowledgement of connecting with those who step into our circle. And we into theirs. We are better by the company that surrounds us.
A great write, Kristina. That's why I bumped it!
As writers here, words are obviously our skin and bones, and to a point our souls. The heart is peeking, though. It wants to be involved badly, too. Yeah?
Your poem expresses well the acknowledgement of connecting with those who step into our circle. And we into theirs. We are better by the company that surrounds us.
A great write, Kristina. That's why I bumped it!
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Re: Re. You
6th Aug 2023 10:02pm
I am glad it is relatable to others. To be honest I never really thought anyone would like my writing much. It was just something I did for myself. I was very surprised that some here connected with me in regards to my writing and very appreciative of that. But anyway, there is so much more I keep to myself. Lately I have been very emotional but there are reasons for that, reasons I haven't shared on here. Well, not really sure what I am on about... never reply to comments when emotional I suppose. Back to your comment, it's always interesting who we click with isn't it and yes we can become addicted. The heart always has a way of interjecting itself into all affairs!!!
I had hoped it would express that acknowledgement like you say so it's good to hear that. The company that surrounds us is important. Thank you so much for the bump, It means a lot to me. :)
I had hoped it would express that acknowledgement like you say so it's good to hear that. The company that surrounds us is important. Thank you so much for the bump, It means a lot to me. :)
Re. You
6th Aug 2023 10:10pm
hello there beautiful Kristina I miss you too this is really beautiful
I injected myself here... this is really tender and shows your softer side...
that highlights how multifaceted you are... dark, delicious and sexy 💕
I injected myself here... this is really tender and shows your softer side...
that highlights how multifaceted you are... dark, delicious and sexy 💕
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Re: Re. You
6th Aug 2023 10:57pm
I love it when you inject yourself into anything Brenda! You are such an artist, both with your words and other forms of art too. DUP is not the same without your presence and passion so I hope you know that. I am glad you see the softer side, despite the 'darkness' I am actually a tender and incredibly sensitive person. And in some ways that has been very damaging to me in my life but I know that you know what I am talking about. I can definitely feel that. But what could be more alluring than "dark, delicious, and sexy" so let's focus on that part. ;) I definitely say the same about you too. <3