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Somehow,
I find myself
content,
confident
and
intrepid
. . . intertwining the interval,
these dimensions,
and the embroidery
that sets us apart
Even though,
there’s an ache to know
you,
and occupy
your personal space
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
a connection unbroken
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Right now,
contentment
confidence
and timely dimensions,
enable me
to be,
proximate
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Author's Note
(Tender thoughts) - softly reminding me
* * We're Always a Whisper away * *
. . . and our hearts echo in the wind
* * We're Always a Whisper away * *
. . . and our hearts echo in the wind
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16th Apr 2023 9:09pm
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16th Apr 2023 11:19am
Dear B,
I enjoyed your poem greatly. Your formatting style also lends itself to an easy flow. It made me think of a time where I had a crush on someone but wasn’t cool about it. Then changed tack and created space for things to happen naturally. Terrific piece. H🌷
I enjoyed your poem greatly. Your formatting style also lends itself to an easy flow. It made me think of a time where I had a crush on someone but wasn’t cool about it. Then changed tack and created space for things to happen naturally. Terrific piece. H🌷
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Honoria,
Thank you for noticing the way my words caress the page. I appreciate you saying it flows so easily. Sometimes, space is needed when you feel a strong connection with someone. When the time is right, hearts connect. It sounds like that's what happened in your situation.
Thank you for your lovely comment. 🌸
B
Thank you for noticing the way my words caress the page. I appreciate you saying it flows so easily. Sometimes, space is needed when you feel a strong connection with someone. When the time is right, hearts connect. It sounds like that's what happened in your situation.
Thank you for your lovely comment. 🌸
B
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16th Apr 2023 1:42pm
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17th Apr 2023 2:12am
Hi Debbie,
So kind of you to read this a few times.
Your lovely comment is appreciated.
I hope you have a wonderful week ! 🌺
So kind of you to read this a few times.
Your lovely comment is appreciated.
I hope you have a wonderful week ! 🌺
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17th Apr 2023 2:17am
There's "a feminine perfume wafting thru the lines." Yes, you're correct ! It seems you know me, without knowing me- if that makes sense. 😊
Your thoughts are beautiful and my heart is smiling.
Thank you for your lovely comment, TW !
Your thoughts are beautiful and my heart is smiling.
Thank you for your lovely comment, TW !
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19th Apr 2023 8:41am
from my take...
the expression of emotion you have harnessed.
your words capturing the essence of bonding
the closeness that strengthens one
just knowing
fearless,
in the moment, a timely place.
thank you for sharing your lovely write.
the expression of emotion you have harnessed.
your words capturing the essence of bonding
the closeness that strengthens one
just knowing
fearless,
in the moment, a timely place.
thank you for sharing your lovely write.
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20th Apr 2023 3:35am
Such a beautifully woven explanation.
Yes, a bond can become stronger, beyond time and space.
Thank you Mystic, for your lovely comment.
Emotions caress the page, while the heart is content.
Yes, a bond can become stronger, beyond time and space.
Thank you Mystic, for your lovely comment.
Emotions caress the page, while the heart is content.
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21st Apr 2023 2:50am
Yes, I completely agree.
A whisper is enough.
Even the wind can feel the emotions within.
The fluttering of my heart.
A whisper is enough.
Even the wind can feel the emotions within.
The fluttering of my heart.
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24th Apr 2023 00:31am
Somehow this poem reminds me the band Train's song *Hey Soul Sister (Hey, Soul Sister)*
Lyrics: https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/train/heysoulsister.html
Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVpv8-5XWOI
... 👍
Lyrics: https://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/train/heysoulsister.html
Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kVpv8-5XWOI
... 👍
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24th Apr 2023 00:41am
An interesting comparison. (I do like that song).
Thank you Marks, for the lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List. : )
Thank you Marks, for the lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List. : )
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26th Apr 2023 7:34pm
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8th May 2023 4:45am
LIke a dream that follows the waking mind and heart. Love that you felt this and by sharing this I too felt your emotional world. Great work indeed my friend.
John
John
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Following a dream is one way to completely take the breath away. Tracing moments in time, as they caress the heart and mind. You're able to feel each emotion within, and that touches my heart deeply.
Thank you, John.
I'm smiling softly. 😊
Thank you, John.
I'm smiling softly. 😊
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22nd May 2023 2:37am
Wonderful write, Brandy❣ I love the word intrepid. I don't think I've ever used it in a poem. I love your self confidence. I will ponder this image for awhile "the embroidery
that sets us apart" We are unique, each of us, and we have have so many experiences etched, tattooed to our psyche and it's a beautiful thing to share our intimate art work.
Bravissimo, Bella poeta❣
that sets us apart" We are unique, each of us, and we have have so many experiences etched, tattooed to our psyche and it's a beautiful thing to share our intimate art work.
Bravissimo, Bella poeta❣
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22nd May 2023 3:51am
Thank you so much, GW. Finding the right word, is how 'Intrepid' found its way into this little scribble of mine. I'm smiling and blushing, with you saying you love my self confidence. I'm just being me.
The thought about "the embroidery that sets us apart," is talking about being far away from someone. Being content, because you can feel them so close.
Your lovely comment is appreciated. 🌺
The thought about "the embroidery that sets us apart," is talking about being far away from someone. Being content, because you can feel them so close.
Your lovely comment is appreciated. 🌺
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22nd May 2023 4:04am