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curled around love
in the sweet echo of love,
these moments in-between,
feel the melody of me . .
let me slowly cradle around your song
- come, and get lost in my depth -
close your eyes as i whisper,
this is where you belong
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Written by
bcharmed
(Brandy Nicole)
Published 13th Apr 2023
| Edited 15th Apr 2023
Author's Note
~ A little message hidden within ~ (Hint- the words in bold)
- a romantic scribble -
- a romantic scribble -
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. curled around love
13th Apr 2023 2:19am
hello Brandy
A wonderful erotica poem
It's nice that you give us room to imagine
I love the way you write
Let us indulge in dirty fantasies
peace and love
MP
A wonderful erotica poem
It's nice that you give us room to imagine
I love the way you write
Let us indulge in dirty fantasies
peace and love
MP
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Re: Re. curled around love
13th Apr 2023 3:29am
Hey there, MP.
It's fun filling in the blanks (letting the imagination run wild).
Thank you for the compliment. My writing seems to tease the senses.
Fantasies are meant to leave you breathless.
: ) Brandy
It's fun filling in the blanks (letting the imagination run wild).
Thank you for the compliment. My writing seems to tease the senses.
Fantasies are meant to leave you breathless.
: ) Brandy
Re: Re. curled around love
13th Apr 2023 3:33am
I always take a role in what I read Brandy
So your words are true about what I felt while I was reading
peace and love
MP
So your words are true about what I felt while I was reading
peace and love
MP
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Re. curled around love
13th Apr 2023 6:17am
very enjoyable...
both sets of scribble.
plain and the bold
truly a nice romantic share.
both sets of scribble.
plain and the bold
truly a nice romantic share.
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Re: Re. curled around love
14th Apr 2023 1:24am
: ) Thank you, Mystic.
I enjoyed creating this simple, yet soft and sensual scribble.
I appreciate your lovely comment.
I enjoyed creating this simple, yet soft and sensual scribble.
I appreciate your lovely comment.
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Apr 2023 10:45am
15th Apr 2023 2:56am
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Re: Re. curled around love
15th Apr 2023 3:00am
Re. curled around love
17th Apr 2023 7:06pm
This is much more than a little romantic scribble my friend. The build-up is gorgeous and that ending invites a sensual interpretation that puts the heat on. Love the passion here that wraps around me as I read.
John
John
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Jul 2023 1:45pm
19th Apr 2023 6:37am
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Re: Re. curled around love
20th Apr 2023 3:24am
I echo that . . .
Oh, yes !
I love being expressive in this way.
Soft and sensual moments linger within.
Your comment is short, but beautiful.
Saying less with more, indeed. ❤️
Oh, yes !
I love being expressive in this way.
Soft and sensual moments linger within.
Your comment is short, but beautiful.
Saying less with more, indeed. ❤️
Re. curled around love
19th May 2023 8:02pm
Re: Re. curled around love
19th May 2023 8:17pm
Opposite of your style, yet you love it . . .
Well, they say that "opposites attract." 😊
Thank you Virge, for your lovely comment.
My style is unique, I suppose.
Well, they say that "opposites attract." 😊
Thank you Virge, for your lovely comment.
My style is unique, I suppose.
Re. curled around love
Oh my, I've missed so many of your masterpieces. Being a music fanatic, this passage touched me most, "feel the melody of me . .
let me slowly cradle around your song "
I feel your melody. The use of cradle is such a comfortable vibe.
Thank you for sharing💞
Oh, and the biting lip pic is pretty darn seductive.
let me slowly cradle around your song "
I feel your melody. The use of cradle is such a comfortable vibe.
Thank you for sharing💞
Oh, and the biting lip pic is pretty darn seductive.
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Re: Re. curled around love
22nd May 2023 4:02am
* * Smiling * *
It's okay, GW. There's no rush, my poetry isn't going anywhere.
So kind of you to call my poetry a masterpiece. (I use this word a lot myself).
This particular stanza is about being wrapped in love, sharing a symphony of sighs, while curling around a beautiful song. If you know what I mean. I'm blushing. 😊
Indeed ! The picture helps create the mood.
Thank you for your lovely comment.
It's okay, GW. There's no rush, my poetry isn't going anywhere.
So kind of you to call my poetry a masterpiece. (I use this word a lot myself).
This particular stanza is about being wrapped in love, sharing a symphony of sighs, while curling around a beautiful song. If you know what I mean. I'm blushing. 😊
Indeed ! The picture helps create the mood.
Thank you for your lovely comment.
Re. curled around love
29th May 2023 4:33pm
Echoing the song of love
As we’re resting in between
These words repeated in my mind
Now that I have been to the scene
As we’re resting in between
These words repeated in my mind
Now that I have been to the scene
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Re: Re. curled around love
29th May 2023 6:23pm
Your thoughts are so beautifully written and presented.
Like a soft melody caressing the wind.
Thank you, Em.
You've painted a lovely picture with your words.
Like a soft melody caressing the wind.
Thank you, Em.
You've painted a lovely picture with your words.
Re: Re. curled around love
29th May 2023 6:43pm
Re. curled around love
4th Sep 2023 00:34am
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely true 👍 a message with a little hint, a small clue attraction for your distant lover whenever there feeling sad and blue!!
Excellent 👌 body of art work bcharmed my lady 👩 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Excellent 👌 body of art work bcharmed my lady 👩 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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Re. curled around love
4th Sep 2023 3:01am
A message within a message, is such a playful way to be expressive in poetry. ☺️
Thank you Rich, for your lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List.
Thank you Rich, for your lovely comment and for adding this to your Reading List.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
6th Sep 2023 3:21am
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Re: Re. curled around love
6th Sep 2023 3:25am
Thank you, Tim. I've never thought about this being a song. Yes, it could be.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) So kind of you to add this to your Reading List.
Your thoughts bring a smile. : ) So kind of you to add this to your Reading List.
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
6th Sep 2023 3:27am
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