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Demanding Demonic
Like a sepia smudge on the clear landscape,
pain hovers inconveniently,
right at the edge of the visual field
where it is never quite in focus
but cannot be ignored.
Despite attempts to scrub it away,
it lingers, demanding attention
and so I employ distraction.
Some bracing sea air,
good food and great company
fill the afternoon
and my consciousness.
Angry at being ignored,
the pain escalates;
poking and throbbing and provoking.
Evening falls and I give in;
pay it my full attention,
give in to its demands,
but too late.
The sepia smudge,
now a huge, ugly coiling monster,
twists and curls in on itself
taking me with it for the night.
pain hovers inconveniently,
right at the edge of the visual field
where it is never quite in focus
but cannot be ignored.
Despite attempts to scrub it away,
it lingers, demanding attention
and so I employ distraction.
Some bracing sea air,
good food and great company
fill the afternoon
and my consciousness.
Angry at being ignored,
the pain escalates;
poking and throbbing and provoking.
Evening falls and I give in;
pay it my full attention,
give in to its demands,
but too late.
The sepia smudge,
now a huge, ugly coiling monster,
twists and curls in on itself
taking me with it for the night.
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Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 2:28pm
Three Magi, Three Wise Man followed a Star to get to the sacred meeting place....rest we made it through the night.... beautiful poetry ❤️
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Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 2:30pm
Thank you! I've been sick and rushed this out today to catch up. I'm not sure about the current quality, but just told it how it is!
Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 4:26pm
I'm so proud of you medication is what you need not judgement but of course lady...it's your choice you know but the pain is oppressive I'm going to lift you up today...
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10th Apr 2023 9:22pm
Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
11th Apr 2023 1:09am
I would wish a miracle for you but I'm out of wishes plus I believe in magic aka Magi really...
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Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
11th Apr 2023 1:21am
Had exactly the same last year. I got some control and the migraines went away... eventually!
Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 2:52pm
Great concept write. What's the saying? That which we resist, persists. You did a great job depicting this.
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Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 3:16pm
I'm trying! If I could just kick the pain, I'd be feeling more creative. But I can't, so I'll have to carry on regardless!
Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 3:06pm
Excellent metaphor throughout, Waffle. Beautifully done! Goodness, I’m hoping you feel better soon 💖
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Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 3:14pm
I just can't quite kick it, regardless of what I do - sleep or not, every painkiller and every allergy drug known to mankind, and have now run out of triptans. Aargh! Hopefully it will burn itself out eventually.
Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 4:50pm
You've expressed that lurking pain so well... I hope you get some relief soon. Pain is exhausting...
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Re: Re. Demanding Demonic
10th Apr 2023 7:37pm
Re. Demanding Demonic
11th Apr 2023 4:09pm
Definitely relatable, well expressed though I hope you are feeling better.
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Re. Demanding Demonic
12th Apr 2023 2:48pm