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Solitary Tear Tolls
cremation
fires hotly lick
the skin away
leaving a
grotesque
mess
only
bone
particles
give
refrencece
to a life
where
pain now
ceases
existence
never
was
amongst
greyish
ash
a solitary
tear
tolls
for
me
fires hotly lick
the skin away
leaving a
grotesque
mess
only
bone
particles
give
refrencece
to a life
where
pain now
ceases
existence
never
was
amongst
greyish
ash
a solitary
tear
tolls
for
me
Published 9th Apr 2023
Author's Note
haggis
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9th Apr 2023 9:41pm
Dear AP,
I was enthralled by this write. It made me hope we’ll all be remembered by those who loved us during our time together. I’m not sure how appropriate my response was to your authors note but I had a giggle when I read haggis. Having experienced haggis I thought of “greyish ash” as the perfect description of it (sorry not really a fan of the haggis).
I enjoyed the write though 😊
H🌷
I was enthralled by this write. It made me hope we’ll all be remembered by those who loved us during our time together. I’m not sure how appropriate my response was to your authors note but I had a giggle when I read haggis. Having experienced haggis I thought of “greyish ash” as the perfect description of it (sorry not really a fan of the haggis).
I enjoyed the write though 😊
H🌷
9th Apr 2023 9:51pm
haggis
a code word any possible dark being thought of as real thpughts rather than a purge
so they dont worry
the wee buggers are hard to catch
a code word any possible dark being thought of as real thpughts rather than a purge
so they dont worry
the wee buggers are hard to catch
9th Apr 2023 9:58pm
