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revival
we forgot the warmth of sunny days, saturating sapphire skies
it melts the frost off my skin
and dusts my psyche
so, i wait for bloom
just as the desert did this march
no, i cannot rush the season
forced germination yields nothing, does it?
my pale, frail flower
she cries for help
pink has abandoned her cheeks
we hug in cobwebbed rooms, and i whisper:
“revival is on the horizon”
and it will eclipse the depressive gloom.
it melts the frost off my skin
and dusts my psyche
so, i wait for bloom
just as the desert did this march
no, i cannot rush the season
forced germination yields nothing, does it?
my pale, frail flower
she cries for help
pink has abandoned her cheeks
we hug in cobwebbed rooms, and i whisper:
“revival is on the horizon”
and it will eclipse the depressive gloom.
Published 4th Apr 2023
Author's Note
NaPo entry 4, 2023
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
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6th Apr 2023 3:12am
4th Apr 2023 9:25pm
You already know how much I adore, appreciate and revere your ink. I was so selfishly excited to see you were participating in NaPo again this year, knowing that I'd get an opportunity to again partake in your talents.... I hope you are enjoying the challenge! Keep at it, dear lady... you got this!
*This lovely inspirational piece may start as this hopeful whisper but it leaves me feeling a true connectedness to the emotional space that's tenderly called forth*
Excellent poeting, dear one
I look forward to reading more this month
🌹 💙 - 🧚🏻♀️
B
*This lovely inspirational piece may start as this hopeful whisper but it leaves me feeling a true connectedness to the emotional space that's tenderly called forth*
Excellent poeting, dear one
I look forward to reading more this month
🌹 💙 - 🧚🏻♀️
B
6th Apr 2023 3:13am
Honored to hear from you friend, I am excited to be back! Looking forward to this season of poetry and reading your lovely inks. Many thanks and fairy hugs 🧚♀️💚
