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𝒜 𝓈𝓊𝑔𝒶𝓇 𝒸𝑜𝒶𝓉𝑒𝒹 𝒸𝒶𝓃𝒹𝓎
𝒜 𝓀𝒾𝓈𝓈 𝒶𝓈 𝓈𝓌𝑒𝑒𝓉 𝒶𝓈 𝓈𝓊𝓂𝓂𝑒𝓇
𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝒸𝒶𝓅𝓉𝓊𝓇𝑒 𝓂𝓎 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉
𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝑜𝓈𝑒 𝑔𝑜𝓁𝒹𝑒𝓃 𝓈𝓊𝓃𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓂 𝓁𝑜𝒸𝓀𝓈
𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝑒𝓂𝒷𝓇𝒶𝒸𝑒 𝓌𝒶𝓇𝓂𝑒𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝓊𝓃
𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝓈𝑜𝒻𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓃 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓋𝑒𝓃
𝒮𝑜 𝓂𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝐼’𝓁𝓁 𝑔𝒾𝓋𝑒 𝒶𝓌𝒶𝓎 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝒾𝓉
𝒜𝓁𝓁 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓎𝑜𝓊
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝒪𝓊𝓇 𝓈𝓎𝓂𝓅𝒽𝑜𝓃𝓎
𝐼𝓃 𝓈𝑜𝓃𝑔 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓃 𝒽𝑜𝓇𝓇𝑜𝓇
𝒜 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒷𝓁𝑒𝑒𝒹𝒾𝓃𝑔
𝒟𝒶𝓇𝓀, 𝒹𝒶𝓇𝓀 𝒷𝓁𝑜𝑜𝒹
𝒯𝒶𝓀𝑒 𝓂𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝓇𝓊𝓂𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉, 𝓂𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝐼𝓉’𝓈 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇𝓈 𝓉𝑜 𝓅𝑜𝓈𝓈𝑒𝓈𝓈
𝒫𝓁𝒶𝓎 𝒾𝓉 𝓉𝒾𝓁 𝒾𝓉 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓅𝓈
𝒯𝒾𝓁 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓎 𝓁𝒶𝓈𝓉 𝑔𝓊𝓈𝒽
𝒮𝓆𝓊𝑒𝑒𝓏𝑒 𝒾𝓉 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇 𝒾𝓉 𝓈𝓆𝓊𝑒𝓁𝒸𝒽 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓅𝓊𝓁𝓈𝑒
𝒟𝑜𝓃’𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝓈𝒸𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓂 𝓃𝑜𝓌
𝐵𝑒 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝒶𝒻𝓇𝒶𝒾𝒹 𝐼 𝓈𝒶𝓎.
𝒜𝒻𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝒾𝓈𝓃’𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓌𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝓌𝒶𝓃𝓉𝑒𝒹
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝒪𝒽 𝓈𝑜 𝑔𝑜𝓇𝑔𝑒𝑜𝓊𝓈
𝒩𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓂𝒾𝓃𝒹 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝒹𝒾𝓈𝓂𝒶𝓎
𝒜 𝓀𝒾𝓈𝓈 𝒶𝓈 𝓈𝓌𝑒𝑒𝓉 𝒶𝓈 𝓈𝓊𝓂𝓂𝑒𝓇
𝒴𝑜𝓊 𝒸𝒶𝓅𝓉𝓊𝓇𝑒 𝓂𝓎 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉
𝒲𝒾𝓉𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝑜𝓈𝑒 𝑔𝑜𝓁𝒹𝑒𝓃 𝓈𝓊𝓃𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓂 𝓁𝑜𝒸𝓀𝓈
𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝑒𝓂𝒷𝓇𝒶𝒸𝑒 𝓌𝒶𝓇𝓂𝑒𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓃 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓈𝓊𝓃
𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝓈𝑜𝒻𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓃 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓋𝑒𝓃
𝒮𝑜 𝓂𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒 𝐼’𝓁𝓁 𝑔𝒾𝓋𝑒 𝒶𝓌𝒶𝓎 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝒾𝓉
𝒜𝓁𝓁 𝒻𝑜𝓇 𝓎𝑜𝓊
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝒪𝓊𝓇 𝓈𝓎𝓂𝓅𝒽𝑜𝓃𝓎
𝐼𝓃 𝓈𝑜𝓃𝑔 𝓌𝓇𝒾𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓃 𝒽𝑜𝓇𝓇𝑜𝓇
𝒜 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒷𝓁𝑒𝑒𝒹𝒾𝓃𝑔
𝒟𝒶𝓇𝓀, 𝒹𝒶𝓇𝓀 𝒷𝓁𝑜𝑜𝒹
𝒯𝒶𝓀𝑒 𝓂𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝓇𝓊𝓂𝓂𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇𝓉, 𝓂𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝐼𝓉’𝓈 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇𝓈 𝓉𝑜 𝓅𝑜𝓈𝓈𝑒𝓈𝓈
𝒫𝓁𝒶𝓎 𝒾𝓉 𝓉𝒾𝓁 𝒾𝓉 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓅𝓈
𝒯𝒾𝓁 𝒾𝓉𝓈 𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓎 𝓁𝒶𝓈𝓉 𝑔𝓊𝓈𝒽
𝒮𝓆𝓊𝑒𝑒𝓏𝑒 𝒾𝓉 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒽𝑒𝒶𝓇 𝒾𝓉 𝓈𝓆𝓊𝑒𝓁𝒸𝒽 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓅𝓊𝓁𝓈𝑒
𝒟𝑜𝓃’𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝓈𝒸𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓂 𝓃𝑜𝓌
𝐵𝑒 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝒶𝒻𝓇𝒶𝒾𝒹 𝐼 𝓈𝒶𝓎.
𝒜𝒻𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝒾𝓈𝓃’𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓌𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓎𝑜𝓊 𝓌𝒶𝓃𝓉𝑒𝒹
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝑀𝓎 𝓁𝑜𝓋𝑒
𝒪𝒽 𝓈𝑜 𝑔𝑜𝓇𝑔𝑒𝑜𝓊𝓈
𝒩𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓂𝒾𝓃𝒹 𝓎𝑜𝓊𝓇 𝒹𝒾𝓈𝓂𝒶𝓎
Published 30th Mar 2023
Author's Note
I wrote this for a writing competition I really wanted to start out with something sweet and have it take a dark twist. If anyone has any advice on how to make that transition better at all it would be greatly appreciated. I tried to get the reader to feel a sense of horror and dread at the end, so I hope I did that good as well.
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- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
30th Mar 2023 6:33pm
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30th Mar 2023 7:09pm
Thank you for your input <3 besides my poems I'm not very well spoken so I'm afraid I can't return a lengthy response. However, thank you for pointing out that grammatical error I didn't notice it since I was in a bit of a rush to finish this poem because I had to get to my next class.
