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Not Done Yet
To soften the blow
I’ve heard it said
“sixty’s just a number”
***albeit a big one…
I add under my breath***
optimistically I believe
sexagenarians
still can play
sing, dance have heaps of fun
eschewing the notion
that I’m nye unto death
or that I’ve crossed the border
Into “he’s had a good life” territory
for I’ve “*miles to go before I sleep”
several more chapters
to add to my story
*Robert Frost, Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
I’ve heard it said
“sixty’s just a number”
***albeit a big one…
I add under my breath***
optimistically I believe
sexagenarians
still can play
sing, dance have heaps of fun
eschewing the notion
that I’m nye unto death
or that I’ve crossed the border
Into “he’s had a good life” territory
for I’ve “*miles to go before I sleep”
several more chapters
to add to my story
*Robert Frost, Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
Published 30th Mar 2023
Author's Note
I've, somehow, completed 60 years on planet Earth. This piece expresses my wishes for my sixties😁
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30th Mar 2023 9:37am
30th Mar 2023 9:47am
Dear GW,
I wish you many happy returns of the day with many more years to celebrate them. I don’t think age defines any of us. It might limit us in speed but not in dancing, singing, loving, experiencing new things. We just get to do all these things with a greater sense of wisdom and appreciation. Love the poem. H🌷
I wish you many happy returns of the day with many more years to celebrate them. I don’t think age defines any of us. It might limit us in speed but not in dancing, singing, loving, experiencing new things. We just get to do all these things with a greater sense of wisdom and appreciation. Love the poem. H🌷
30th Mar 2023 3:14pm
Wonderful! Congratulations on threescore trips around the sun! I hope you're going around telling EVERYONE that you're a sexagenarian now. 😁 Don't ever stop having fun.
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31st Mar 2023 7:47pm
I concur with our friends above. It's good to see some writing from you.
Anonymous
3rd Apr 2023 3:36am
Happy 60thy BB
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