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Haiku

Fire burning
Ashes fading into gray
Heat upon my face

Written by FrostyMittens

(Jennifer Hill)

Published 29th Mar 2023

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Anonymous

- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm

29th Mar 2023 4:50pm

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29th Mar 2023 4:52pm

Better than being glued inside to a phone or computer. Simpler times

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Anonymous

- Edited 2nd Jul 2023 5:45pm

29th Mar 2023 4:53pm

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11th Apr 2023 7:14am

another good one

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Anonymous

20th Apr 2023 3:46am

Big impact. Nicely done.

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21st Apr 2023 7:12pm

Thank you

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