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Broken Friendship or just Anxiety?
I really thought I knew you
I thought you were my friend
but then you started acting
like I'd managed to offend
You gave me too much Distance
You made me feel alone
I felt this chasm open
and I don't think it will close
My mind descends to darkness
My heart is in my throat
My fear comes to the forefront
I was simply a footnote.
I thought you were my friend
but then you started acting
like I'd managed to offend
You gave me too much Distance
You made me feel alone
I felt this chasm open
and I don't think it will close
My mind descends to darkness
My heart is in my throat
My fear comes to the forefront
I was simply a footnote.
Published 28th Mar 2023
Author's Note
I feel like someone I have become close with is pulling away, but I then I think I'm overthinking some very small things. But then I worry that they never even considered me a close friend in the first place, and I imagined our whole friendship.
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22nd Aug 2023 12:51pm
This is a reflection on a theme that many, if not all experience, I have felt the same way as you have described.
Sometimes we find our friends exchange us as a foe, or perhaps indeed one can also have put more weight on the friendship scale, I thought this was an insightful poem!
A\R
Sometimes we find our friends exchange us as a foe, or perhaps indeed one can also have put more weight on the friendship scale, I thought this was an insightful poem!
A\R
