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After All This Time
Like a long-lost love song that fill up you with nostalgia
When the melody captured the moment forever forward to no end
This emotion lingers in the depths of me
Reminiscent of sleepless nights and letters enthusiastically penned
Like engaging dreams dwelling in the back of my mind
They fuel a lasting passion that’s full of quixotic imagination
The feeling goes beyond visionary boundaries
Filling the heart with wonderful and extraordinary inspiration
Like an undying ember that burns feverishly, fervently
The eternal flame will always write your name within my heart
You and I took a chance on this epic romance
Because there was something so special right from the start
Through the highs and lows that not everyone knows
Destiny brought us together like it was part of a divine design
We’ve held on to each other tightly, rightly
Loving you more now than ever before after all this time
Published 25th Mar 2023
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25th Mar 2023 7:58pm
I’ve read this a few times, always with a heavy heart. Reconnecting with a soul mate doesn’t always work out. This is beautiful work even if it makes me sad.
30th Mar 2023 4:05am
Thank you for your comment. It's also a lot of work on both of our parts. Going on 21 years, sometimes I have to think about the beginning with nostalgia.
25th Mar 2023 8:11pm
This is leaps and bounds better than any bouquet of flowers or hallmark greeting card. I know your wife will cherish and adore it.
You encompass everything that soul mate love is, the good and the difficult allowing you to craft this beautiful ode to your wife with such honest reverence and monumental heart.
You both are lucky.... and deserving.
Stellar ink, Walter
🌹B
You encompass everything that soul mate love is, the good and the difficult allowing you to craft this beautiful ode to your wife with such honest reverence and monumental heart.
You both are lucky.... and deserving.
Stellar ink, Walter
🌹B
30th Mar 2023 4:07am
Thank you so much Blue.
I read it to her and she got the feels so I think I did good.
I was just commenting above that it takes work and patience, (lots of patience) and that at some point we're able to see how we made it through the tough times. So it makes it that more special.
Like a lot of patience.
I read it to her and she got the feels so I think I did good.
I was just commenting above that it takes work and patience, (lots of patience) and that at some point we're able to see how we made it through the tough times. So it makes it that more special.
Like a lot of patience.
26th Mar 2023 3:37am
I think its some of your finest writing, I was really moved so I didn't want to focus on the forms and dimensions of writing like I do in general.
30th Mar 2023 4:09am
Dang Daniel, you honor me with that comment and RL.
I had to pause and think about this one, not just because it was for competition prompt but because I wrote while she was right next to me. Reflection and retrospect give us "old" timers a little more to think about.
I had to pause and think about this one, not just because it was for competition prompt but because I wrote while she was right next to me. Reflection and retrospect give us "old" timers a little more to think about.
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